ADR - Episode 535: Corpse Collector

[00:00:15] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh, hello and welcome to Al Dente Rigamortis. I'm Review Cultist.

[00:00:21] [SPEAKER_05]: I'm Mikey, the East End's Rival.

[00:00:23] [SPEAKER_00]: And I'm the Gamer in Yellow.

[00:00:25] [SPEAKER_03]: And we're here to discuss those internet stories, most creepy and most pasta, and be critically

[00:00:29] [SPEAKER_03]: silly doing it. And tonight we have Corpse Collector.

[00:00:34] [SPEAKER_03]: So before we get things out of the way, so I'm back from Jankon. And I'm going to apologize

[00:00:40] [SPEAKER_03]: for any sniffles or stuffy voice that I have. I caught the con crud of con cruds, COVID.

[00:00:51] [SPEAKER_03]: So I'm quarantined. But thankfully we've been recording online so we can still do this.

[00:00:58] [SPEAKER_03]: Yes, I'm currently a plague cultist. I'm a cultist to nirgle.

[00:01:05] [SPEAKER_00]: Give it like a plague doctor, but doctor mask on underneath the.

[00:01:09] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, yeah. Yeah, just I have a plague doctor mask on right now for anybody listening that

[00:01:15] [SPEAKER_03]: like is like, well, why is this voice sounds so nasally or whatever? Why does he keep coughing?

[00:01:21] [SPEAKER_03]: But yeah, so I'm back from Jankon and we are doing Corpse Collector.

[00:01:26] [SPEAKER_00]: Thank God you're back. So we don't have to do the hard work anymore.

[00:01:30] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, how was that? By the way, how was the how was it going so low?

[00:01:34] [SPEAKER_00]: Well, like I said on the recording last week, welcome to the shit show, because

[00:01:39] [SPEAKER_00]: that's what it is when you're not here to take the reins because we don't know how to do it.

[00:01:43] [SPEAKER_03]: Feel my pain.

[00:01:46] [SPEAKER_03]: Well, I'm glad you guys were able to muscle through while I was gone.

[00:01:52] [SPEAKER_00]: So it was fun regardless.

[00:01:55] [SPEAKER_03]: Excellent.

[00:01:57] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, so Corpse Collector, it's by Cass Chesa on Creepawst.wiki.

[00:02:03] [SPEAKER_03]: So you can check it out over there.

[00:02:05] [SPEAKER_03]: I think it's a fairly new one on Creepawst.wiki, if I remember correctly.

[00:02:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I know that's something we're reviewing, so it's probably not super new.

[00:02:12] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, actually, it's a staff pick.

[00:02:15] [SPEAKER_00]: Nice.

[00:02:16] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, it's a yeah, it's a fairly I think I think it might be a fairly

[00:02:20] [SPEAKER_03]: new one because I think that's how I found it as I picked it off the most recent

[00:02:24] [SPEAKER_03]: Creepawst list from the from the account.

[00:02:32] [SPEAKER_03]: Also, connective tissues a bit.

[00:02:34] [SPEAKER_03]: So I was down in Kentucky as well on my Junkon trip and I'm just like

[00:02:37] [SPEAKER_03]: I just browsed down the from the writer's showcase thing.

[00:02:41] [SPEAKER_03]: And one of the ones that come out is like I followed an abandoned

[00:02:43] [SPEAKER_03]: path on the Appalachian Trail.

[00:02:45] [SPEAKER_03]: I was like, Ha!

[00:02:48] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, anybody who knows about what what goes down and

[00:02:53] [SPEAKER_03]: when I hang out with my friends in Kentucky, we like to talk about the Appalachian

[00:02:57] [SPEAKER_03]: trail and the Appalachians.

[00:03:00] [SPEAKER_03]: So anyway, back to the story at hand.

[00:03:03] [SPEAKER_03]: So yeah, the Corpse Collector.

[00:03:06] [SPEAKER_03]: I suppose we should do our initial recommendations before we get too far ahead.

[00:03:11] [SPEAKER_00]: I know last week I was suggesting potentially moving

[00:03:16] [SPEAKER_00]: initial recommendations right before we actually talk about it,

[00:03:19] [SPEAKER_00]: mainly because I completely forgot about it early on.

[00:03:26] [SPEAKER_03]: I still like at the very beginning.

[00:03:28] [SPEAKER_03]: That's fine. Then let's do it.

[00:03:30] [SPEAKER_03]: OK. Yeah, I'm going to recommend this story.

[00:03:36] [SPEAKER_05]: I am also going to recommend the story.

[00:03:40] [SPEAKER_05]: I'm going to give it a partial

[00:03:42] [SPEAKER_00]: for the time being, we'll see if you guys change my opinions by the time we get to the end.

[00:03:47] [SPEAKER_03]: OK.

[00:03:49] [SPEAKER_03]: Well, then without further ado, let's do the rundown

[00:03:53] [SPEAKER_03]: featuring Nair.

[00:03:55] [SPEAKER_03]: So Nair is cutting open a tomato positive mouse

[00:03:59] [SPEAKER_03]: it has or they have grabbed from a cage of other mice

[00:04:03] [SPEAKER_03]: and commenting on the color inside before placing it out on their window

[00:04:08] [SPEAKER_03]: outside. You see, back when Nair was younger in high school, in fact,

[00:04:15] [SPEAKER_03]: they found the remains of a run over deer in a patch of trees where they walked

[00:04:20] [SPEAKER_03]: as they stood there and tried to figure out exactly what it was at the time.

[00:04:24] [SPEAKER_03]: A creepy flesh and bone coat creature

[00:04:28] [SPEAKER_03]: swooped in and took it took the remains.

[00:04:32] [SPEAKER_03]: This unnerved Nair, but they never saw the creature in that place

[00:04:37] [SPEAKER_03]: afterward, despite always checking.

[00:04:40] [SPEAKER_03]: They did see the creature again, though, years later as they were working

[00:04:44] [SPEAKER_03]: at a nature reserve where they placed roadkill out in a field for vultures.

[00:04:50] [SPEAKER_03]: The vultures were acting odd one morning and Nair noticed a blown over nest

[00:04:55] [SPEAKER_03]: of dead and dying bird bird babies.

[00:04:59] [SPEAKER_03]: As Nair looked on once again, the flesh coat creature arrived

[00:05:04] [SPEAKER_03]: and took the bird bodies with the with a with a tentacled arm woven from animal tails.

[00:05:12] [SPEAKER_03]: The creature then proceeded to pop the heads of the baby birds

[00:05:16] [SPEAKER_03]: and make eyes of them on its weirdly,

[00:05:21] [SPEAKER_03]: guinless, fleshy like face.

[00:05:24] [SPEAKER_03]: Like it didn't actually have anything like it was just its face just kind

[00:05:27] [SPEAKER_03]: of when before the before it started using the bird heads as eyes,

[00:05:31] [SPEAKER_03]: its face was kind of just expressionless or didn't have any like actual like details.

[00:05:35] [SPEAKER_03]: It was just kind of look like as Nair described it, chewed up gum

[00:05:40] [SPEAKER_03]: of like flesh and muscle.

[00:05:42] [SPEAKER_03]: So and it seemed to show all this to Nair before venturing back into the tree line.

[00:05:50] [SPEAKER_03]: Nair then went home that day to rethink their life,

[00:05:54] [SPEAKER_03]: eventually deciding to take dead and dying animals and leaving them on

[00:06:00] [SPEAKER_03]: their their porch for the creature, which eventually came by and began taking the gifts.

[00:06:08] [SPEAKER_03]: It would even then leave its own gifts like little coins and buttons and such for Nair.

[00:06:14] [SPEAKER_03]: Back to the the tomato mice situation from the beginning of the story.

[00:06:20] [SPEAKER_03]: The the creature does arrive on the porch and takes these

[00:06:25] [SPEAKER_03]: these these rat or these little like mice corpses appreciatively.

[00:06:29] [SPEAKER_03]: As for Nair, these are basically these are like treats for the creature.

[00:06:33] [SPEAKER_03]: He's he's giving them before mattering the organs all over its face.

[00:06:41] [SPEAKER_03]: Nair notices that the creature is smiling back at them

[00:06:45] [SPEAKER_03]: this time with a mouthful of human molders as it is added new additions to its body.

[00:06:53] [SPEAKER_03]: Finn.

[00:06:56] [SPEAKER_03]: So that was Corpse Collector and I suppose we'll move on to

[00:07:03] [SPEAKER_02]: her one tolerance of grammar and positions at this point.

[00:07:07] [SPEAKER_03]: I've got two bits here.

[00:07:11] [SPEAKER_03]: Two points of contention for grammar.

[00:07:16] [SPEAKER_03]: You start with this one here.

[00:07:19] [SPEAKER_03]: Bedding scrapes and scatters.

[00:07:21] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh, betting scrapes and scatters nearby as the remaining borrowed mice,

[00:07:27] [SPEAKER_03]: scamper and fight.

[00:07:29] [SPEAKER_03]: So is it supposed to be is it supposed to be borrowed or borrowed

[00:07:35] [SPEAKER_03]: as as the remaining borrowed mice, scamper and fight?

[00:07:40] [SPEAKER_00]: He stole the mice.

[00:07:41] [SPEAKER_00]: They're borrowed, quote unquote.

[00:07:43] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, that maybe. Yeah.

[00:07:46] [SPEAKER_00]: Also, the problem I had with that is in regards to the betting

[00:07:49] [SPEAKER_00]: scrapes and scatters.

[00:07:51] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, betting is like sawdust.

[00:07:55] [SPEAKER_00]: So betting is is that referred to as betting scrapes?

[00:07:58] [SPEAKER_03]: No, betting scrapes and scatters.

[00:08:01] [SPEAKER_03]: Like so the betting is what's scraping and scattering

[00:08:06] [SPEAKER_03]: nearby as the remaining borrowed mice, scamper and fight.

[00:08:09] [SPEAKER_03]: Like basically the the mice are are pushing around the betting

[00:08:12] [SPEAKER_03]: as and it scrapes and scatters about.

[00:08:16] [SPEAKER_01]: Oh, yeah.

[00:08:17] [SPEAKER_03]: OK, scraping is a is a is a verb, I think in this point, not a

[00:08:21] [SPEAKER_00]: not a sound. Yeah.

[00:08:23] [SPEAKER_00]: OK, gotcha. Yeah, because I I didn't catch that.

[00:08:27] [SPEAKER_00]: I thought it was referring.

[00:08:29] [SPEAKER_00]: It was meaning like betting scraps and random debris is what

[00:08:32] [SPEAKER_00]: it's referring to as like not like official mice, betting stuff.

[00:08:37] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I you could probably get rid of scrapes to help clear that up

[00:08:41] [SPEAKER_03]: because like betting scatters nearby as the remaining borrowed

[00:08:45] [SPEAKER_03]: mice, scamper and fight like that makes that that clears that up basically.

[00:08:50] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, it was that it.

[00:08:53] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah. OK.

[00:08:55] [SPEAKER_03]: And then my my other grammar acquisition that I have is

[00:09:00] [SPEAKER_03]: when that failed to attract the creature, I went out to collect

[00:09:04] [SPEAKER_03]: recently dead or dying animals to little along my porch.

[00:09:09] [SPEAKER_03]: So this is a case where I think little is supposed to be litter

[00:09:12] [SPEAKER_03]: to litter along my porch.

[00:09:17] [SPEAKER_03]: Because like he's basically like littering or smattering

[00:09:20] [SPEAKER_03]: or like placing the the animals along his porch for the creature to pick up and such.

[00:09:25] [SPEAKER_00]: So scraping and scattering across the porch.

[00:09:28] [SPEAKER_03]: Yes, it's getting.

[00:09:31] [SPEAKER_03]: But yeah, so.

[00:09:36] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, that's what I've got for grammar acquisition.

[00:09:38] [SPEAKER_03]: So Mikey, these days for you.

[00:09:41] [SPEAKER_05]: I have a story.

[00:09:45] [SPEAKER_05]: Yes, it's not story.

[00:09:46] [SPEAKER_03]: All right.

[00:09:48] [SPEAKER_03]: And now an it story with Mikey, the East End's for evil.

[00:09:53] [SPEAKER_03]: Take it away.

[00:09:55] [SPEAKER_05]: It was humid, but the air was cooling.

[00:10:00] [SPEAKER_05]: So I took my time on my walk.

[00:10:03] [SPEAKER_05]: It didn't stink the way old chicken and crab traps did.

[00:10:08] [SPEAKER_05]: Slimy and green and so fally.

[00:10:11] [SPEAKER_05]: You'd vomit in your nose before you could fully describe their rotting chicken scent.

[00:10:17] [SPEAKER_05]: It was like a trance.

[00:10:20] [SPEAKER_05]: It wore no skins.

[00:10:23] [SPEAKER_05]: It never came back.

[00:10:26] [SPEAKER_05]: It just made them easier to handle.

[00:10:29] [SPEAKER_05]: It was only a thaw and I could heave it out of the truck bed on my own.

[00:10:36] [SPEAKER_05]: Its head hung at an odd angle and tear in its gut

[00:10:43] [SPEAKER_05]: was one layer away from spilling out all the organs.

[00:10:49] [SPEAKER_05]: It was the time of day where nocturnal wildlife had gone to bed

[00:10:54] [SPEAKER_05]: and the diurnal had yet to rise.

[00:10:59] [SPEAKER_05]: True peace and quiet.

[00:11:03] [SPEAKER_05]: It was the only thing that ever really bothered me when I put out the roadkill.

[00:11:11] [SPEAKER_05]: It bothered me a little.

[00:11:15] [SPEAKER_05]: It opened its frowning beak only for no sound to come out.

[00:11:22] [SPEAKER_05]: It slinked out of the trees, wearing its grand mottled coat of muscle and bone.

[00:11:30] [SPEAKER_05]: It reached a long arm of weaved nails, weaved tails.

[00:11:38] [SPEAKER_05]: All sorts of tails.

[00:11:40] [SPEAKER_05]: Some of hair, some of skin and muscle and bone, some of shells and scales of sea life.

[00:11:52] [SPEAKER_05]: It didn't end in a hand.

[00:11:56] [SPEAKER_05]: It was such a small quiet motion, but it felt like the biggest mistake I had ever made in that moment.

[00:12:05] [SPEAKER_05]: It peered at me from behind the coat.

[00:12:10] [SPEAKER_05]: Its face was lumpy and pink like a ball of chewed gum.

[00:12:16] [SPEAKER_05]: It held out and opened its arms to show me the little birds so small and pink.

[00:12:25] [SPEAKER_05]: It began to pop the heads off the bodies.

[00:12:30] [SPEAKER_05]: It lifted its head back up to me as it grabbed a head from its hand.

[00:12:37] [SPEAKER_05]: It jammed the bird into its face.

[00:12:41] [SPEAKER_05]: It took the tail to add to its arm.

[00:12:46] [SPEAKER_05]: It took several dead flies to add somewhere else.

[00:12:51] [SPEAKER_05]: It was hesitant at first, wouldn't get close to me.

[00:12:56] [SPEAKER_05]: It brings me knick-knacks like a crow, coins, shiny buttons, jewelry, sometimes even pelts.

[00:13:06] [SPEAKER_05]: It doesn't seem interested in the skins.

[00:13:12] [SPEAKER_05]: It reached out, peeling the organs from the mice.

[00:13:18] [SPEAKER_05]: It pastes them along its head in a carefully crafted spiraling pattern.

[00:13:26] [SPEAKER_05]: It has added to itself since its last being here.

[00:13:32] [SPEAKER_05]: Finn.

[00:13:37] [SPEAKER_00]: Kind of went word for word at one point when it was doing it.

[00:13:40] [SPEAKER_00]: It looked like this and then it did this and that.

[00:13:43] [SPEAKER_00]: I think that's like word for word for what actually happened in the story.

[00:13:46] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, like this basically was like a more like, like basically

[00:13:49] [SPEAKER_03]: just taking quotes from the story to paraphrase the set.

[00:13:53] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:13:55] [SPEAKER_01]: Pretty much.

[00:13:58] [SPEAKER_03]: Also, something that you brought up during your it story reminded me.

[00:14:03] [SPEAKER_03]: I finally found out what apparently day walking animals sound.

[00:14:07] [SPEAKER_03]: What the term is now, diurnal?

[00:14:10] [SPEAKER_03]: I didn't realize that's what the opposite of nocturnal animals was.

[00:14:15] [SPEAKER_03]: Was diurnal.

[00:14:15] [SPEAKER_04]: So weird.

[00:14:16] [SPEAKER_03]: Right?

[00:14:19] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:14:20] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah.

[00:14:23] [SPEAKER_00]: For those unaware, Mikey grabs all the sentences throughout the story.

[00:14:26] [SPEAKER_00]: That's the words that they probably shouldn't like it's ends or butts.

[00:14:29] [SPEAKER_00]: Put something together in a story to sometimes hilarious results.

[00:14:35] [SPEAKER_00]: To basically highlight that, you know, there's always better words to use.

[00:14:40] Yeah.

[00:14:41] [SPEAKER_00]: And if there's enough to actually tell an entire other story,

[00:14:43] [SPEAKER_00]: that says something.

[00:14:45] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:14:46] [SPEAKER_00]: I think said dialogue is one thing and sometimes when it comes to a

[00:14:50] [SPEAKER_00]: creature referring to it as it repeatedly is kind of passable.

[00:14:56] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:14:57] [SPEAKER_00]: What else do you refer to it as?

[00:14:59] [SPEAKER_03]: Exactly.

[00:15:00] [SPEAKER_03]: Like especially with this creature itself, like it is as I keep using the

[00:15:05] [SPEAKER_03]: term it like it's not a he or she it is an amalgam of flesh.

[00:15:10] [SPEAKER_03]: So like it doesn't have a gender.

[00:15:13] [SPEAKER_00]: No, but like you could find you would run out of words real quick.

[00:15:17] [SPEAKER_00]: You'd say the creature, the like the corpse collector,

[00:15:22] [SPEAKER_00]: like there's only so many things you can call it, you know,

[00:15:24] [SPEAKER_00]: without knowing what it is.

[00:15:26] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, like it is a usable word in this instance.

[00:15:32] [SPEAKER_03]: But then we wouldn't have its stories and these silly little bits to our show.

[00:15:40] [SPEAKER_00]: Indeed.

[00:15:42] [SPEAKER_00]: Got to commit to the bit.

[00:15:43] [SPEAKER_03]: Yes.

[00:15:45] [SPEAKER_03]: Wow, that rhymed.

[00:15:47] [SPEAKER_00]: Wow.

[00:15:48] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm a poet and I didn't even realize it.

[00:15:51] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:15:52] [SPEAKER_03]: God damn it.

[00:15:55] [SPEAKER_03]: I knew that was coming to it.

[00:15:58] [SPEAKER_03]: Like, yeah.

[00:16:00] [SPEAKER_04]: Yeah.

[00:16:02] [SPEAKER_03]: All right, gamer.

[00:16:03] [SPEAKER_03]: What's what do we got for grammar and yellow?

[00:16:05] [SPEAKER_03]: Let's see.

[00:16:14] [SPEAKER_00]: So my first note is just kind of a little overarching in regards to

[00:16:20] [SPEAKER_00]: the intro because like me starting to read this story, I was really

[00:16:25] [SPEAKER_00]: struggling to figure out what the hell was going on.

[00:16:30] [SPEAKER_00]: So I don't know if it's truly a grammar thing like, but it's like

[00:16:34] [SPEAKER_00]: there's a lot said in the first few paragraphs, but not a lot being

[00:16:40] [SPEAKER_00]: said in the first few paragraphs if you know what I mean because

[00:16:44] [SPEAKER_00]: it brings up a lot of stuff that I didn't understand like even like

[00:16:47] [SPEAKER_00]: Googling.

[00:16:48] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm like, I don't get it still like tomato positive mice is a great example.

[00:16:52] [SPEAKER_00]: What is tomato mice?

[00:16:54] [SPEAKER_00]: I think like tomato mice are like, it's like a term for a type of

[00:16:59] [SPEAKER_00]: mouse or something.

[00:17:01] [SPEAKER_00]: But I don't know the wording of it was basically the first three

[00:17:06] [SPEAKER_00]: words right off the bat were tomato positive mice.

[00:17:09] [SPEAKER_00]: So the second I started reading this, I'm like, I have no

[00:17:12] [SPEAKER_00]: idea what this is.

[00:17:14] [SPEAKER_05]: Well, the best visual that I got was mice that are called

[00:17:20] [SPEAKER_05]: pinkies that are used to feed like lizards and stuff.

[00:17:29] [SPEAKER_00]: So pinkies are the humans in doom.

[00:17:32] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm I typed in what is a tomato mouse?

[00:17:36] [SPEAKER_03]: And I did find an image of what I assume what basically it's like

[00:17:40] [SPEAKER_03]: not a white mouse, like a lab mouse, but it's a gray like a dark

[00:17:44] [SPEAKER_03]: gray mouse.

[00:17:45] [SPEAKER_03]: And it's from a laboratory like website.

[00:17:48] [SPEAKER_03]: But I don't know if that's.

[00:17:51] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I don't know.

[00:17:54] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, like if anybody out there can like explain this to us,

[00:17:57] [SPEAKER_03]: like leave it at least something in the comments like it like

[00:18:00] [SPEAKER_03]: we're completely missing something about like what tomato

[00:18:03] [SPEAKER_03]: mice are like is it the pinkies like this the hairless mice

[00:18:07] [SPEAKER_03]: like the the fetal mice?

[00:18:08] [SPEAKER_03]: Well, because like that's another thing like would it be

[00:18:10] [SPEAKER_03]: would it be those ones because like they were active and

[00:18:13] [SPEAKER_03]: like moving around and like when when he was grabbing them

[00:18:16] [SPEAKER_03]: so they aren't like because usually like the pink the pinky

[00:18:19] [SPEAKER_03]: ones that you get from the pet store and so for like for snakes

[00:18:22] [SPEAKER_03]: and stuff, they're dead.

[00:18:23] [SPEAKER_03]: Like they're they're already like they're frozen in their

[00:18:25] [SPEAKER_03]: dead like fetal mice can get live once.

[00:18:28] [SPEAKER_03]: But are they still like feel like like that in that condition

[00:18:32] [SPEAKER_03]: or like they growing up at that point?

[00:18:34] [SPEAKER_03]: Okay.

[00:18:35] [SPEAKER_03]: No.

[00:18:37] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I don't know.

[00:18:38] [SPEAKER_03]: Like I'm not I'm not 100% convinced that it is that

[00:18:41] [SPEAKER_03]: or if it's some kind of like other term for like.

[00:18:45] [SPEAKER_03]: Like lab.

[00:18:47] [SPEAKER_00]: What's weird is the wording of it.

[00:18:49] [SPEAKER_00]: It's if it said tomato mice look like bubblegum and

[00:18:52] [SPEAKER_00]: licorice inside, I would just like I'd buy that and move on.

[00:18:56] [SPEAKER_00]: But it's tomato positive mice, which almost sounds like

[00:18:59] [SPEAKER_00]: they're mice that have positively contracted

[00:19:02] [SPEAKER_03]: tomatoism, you know, the fact that uses tomato mice

[00:19:07] [SPEAKER_03]: like three times.

[00:19:09] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, later on it says tomato mice as well.

[00:19:11] [SPEAKER_00]: And that's fine.

[00:19:12] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, it's the positive is what I'm so unpositive about.

[00:19:16] [SPEAKER_02]: Yeah, I can see that a positive tomato positive mice.

[00:19:22] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I'm not getting anything for.

[00:19:26] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, and if you do a search in quotations, it will

[00:19:29] [SPEAKER_00]: only bring up stuff that has that.

[00:19:37] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I get a bunch of like I get a bunch of like

[00:19:41] [SPEAKER_03]: I strangely enough I get a bunch of NIMM websites

[00:19:45] [SPEAKER_03]: like the National Institute of Health.

[00:19:47] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh, I guess that's a meant I get a lot of knee

[00:19:50] [SPEAKER_03]: the National Institute of Health.

[00:19:53] [SPEAKER_00]: And there are nights there who say it.

[00:19:56] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, well, I was referencing like the Rats of NIMM,

[00:19:59] [SPEAKER_03]: which is because NIMM spoilers for for that

[00:20:03] [SPEAKER_03]: book and that awesome animated series, animated

[00:20:06] [SPEAKER_03]: movie NIMM NIH is actually represented the National

[00:20:11] [SPEAKER_03]: Institute of Mental Health.

[00:20:14] [SPEAKER_00]: That's very different.

[00:20:15] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, but yeah, the National Institute of Health

[00:20:18] [SPEAKER_03]: website keeps popping up with like mosaic mutant

[00:20:20] [SPEAKER_03]: analysis identifies.

[00:20:22] [SPEAKER_03]: Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah.

[00:20:24] [SPEAKER_03]: Whenever I tell whenever I have in quotes tomato

[00:20:26] [SPEAKER_03]: positive mice.

[00:20:27] [SPEAKER_04]: Yeah.

[00:20:29] [SPEAKER_00]: So that stuff confused me right off the bat and

[00:20:32] [SPEAKER_00]: basically because of that, I started reading this

[00:20:36] [SPEAKER_00]: story in a negative light just because of the

[00:20:38] [SPEAKER_00]: amount of confusion that I was having to deal with.

[00:20:41] [SPEAKER_03]: It doesn't help that it's in a in a format that you

[00:20:43] [SPEAKER_03]: don't like at the start, which is media res.

[00:20:45] [SPEAKER_00]: I mean, I've started to like accept it because

[00:20:48] [SPEAKER_00]: it's got to happen.

[00:20:49] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, sometimes it's okay.

[00:20:51] [SPEAKER_00]: So I'm like, I get it, you know, I totally get it.

[00:20:54] [SPEAKER_03]: It's the type of storytelling.

[00:20:56] [SPEAKER_03]: It is a it is a it tries to freshen up like a

[00:20:59] [SPEAKER_03]: like like the the regular type of storytelling,

[00:21:02] [SPEAKER_03]: which is like a straightforward thing where it

[00:21:04] [SPEAKER_03]: starts starts halfway through the story and then

[00:21:06] [SPEAKER_03]: goes back to explain things.

[00:21:09] [SPEAKER_00]: Yes.

[00:21:10] [SPEAKER_00]: As long as it actually goes back and explains

[00:21:12] [SPEAKER_00]: things properly, because sometimes they don't.

[00:21:14] [SPEAKER_02]: This one did.

[00:21:16] [SPEAKER_00]: Most say yes.

[00:21:18] [SPEAKER_00]: But I'll move on from there.

[00:21:23] [SPEAKER_00]: And another part about the whole intro moving

[00:21:26] [SPEAKER_00]: on, although I'm still talking about the same area.

[00:21:28] [SPEAKER_00]: Never mind.

[00:21:31] [SPEAKER_00]: Like the visual like I was trying to build on my

[00:21:34] [SPEAKER_00]: head of the start of the story.

[00:21:36] [SPEAKER_00]: I there was a there wasn't enough being said in

[00:21:40] [SPEAKER_00]: my opinion.

[00:21:40] [SPEAKER_00]: So like I didn't even know if like Nair was in a

[00:21:44] [SPEAKER_00]: house with all these mice like in a cage or

[00:21:47] [SPEAKER_00]: something, or if Nair was outside in an alley

[00:21:50] [SPEAKER_00]: way, like grabbing like random like mice that

[00:21:54] [SPEAKER_00]: are just in the alley because it like later

[00:21:58] [SPEAKER_00]: on by paragraph like two or something.

[00:22:00] [SPEAKER_00]: They're like specifically says like he's in a

[00:22:02] [SPEAKER_00]: house and stuff, but he doesn't mention the

[00:22:05] [SPEAKER_00]: mice specifically.

[00:22:07] [SPEAKER_00]: So they could just be mice he's keeping

[00:22:08] [SPEAKER_00]: outside because he doesn't want mice in his house.

[00:22:10] [SPEAKER_00]: There's a lot of questions in regards to me

[00:22:14] [SPEAKER_00]: building the visual of this intro in my head.

[00:22:18] [SPEAKER_00]: So I basically in my head by the end of the

[00:22:20] [SPEAKER_00]: second paragraph, I had Nair inside a house

[00:22:23] [SPEAKER_00]: doing shit and there's a thought bubble

[00:22:26] [SPEAKER_00]: of his head above his head of mice playing

[00:22:29] [SPEAKER_00]: in bedding.

[00:22:30] [SPEAKER_00]: That's all I got.

[00:22:31] [SPEAKER_00]: Because I don't know where they were.

[00:22:33] [SPEAKER_03]: I think this is like a personal thing

[00:22:36] [SPEAKER_03]: because like a like like.

[00:22:38] [SPEAKER_01]: Oh, it's definitely a problem.

[00:22:40] [SPEAKER_03]: I think this is a subjective thing because

[00:22:42] [SPEAKER_03]: like I immediately like theater the mind.

[00:22:46] [SPEAKER_03]: Like as I was reading by the second paragraph

[00:22:48] [SPEAKER_03]: I knew like he was in a house and he was

[00:22:50] [SPEAKER_03]: pulling them from like a cage or something.

[00:22:53] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, but with that being said, I if

[00:22:57] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm taking the story at face value for

[00:22:58] [SPEAKER_00]: what it says, it doesn't say any of that.

[00:23:00] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah.

[00:23:01] [SPEAKER_00]: So it leads to a lot of assumptions.

[00:23:05] [SPEAKER_00]: Which are fine sometimes, but yeah.

[00:23:10] [SPEAKER_00]: Long story short is the start of it was

[00:23:13] [SPEAKER_00]: a bit of a circle for me.

[00:23:15] [SPEAKER_00]: Okay.

[00:23:16] [SPEAKER_00]: Moving on from the intro now for realsies and serious.

[00:23:21] [SPEAKER_02]: So since three.

[00:23:23] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, no, no, it's not going to be one of those.

[00:23:30] [SPEAKER_00]: This is in this is in regards to the

[00:23:33] [SPEAKER_00]: mice and them like moving around.

[00:23:34] [SPEAKER_00]: They dive into the cardboard tubes and

[00:23:37] [SPEAKER_00]: cloth hides I've set up for them.

[00:23:40] [SPEAKER_00]: Would you?

[00:23:42] [SPEAKER_03]: Sorry, I don't mean to cut you off, but like

[00:23:44] [SPEAKER_03]: that is at the beginning.

[00:23:47] [SPEAKER_00]: I mean, probably, but it's not the next line.

[00:23:54] [SPEAKER_03]: Proceed.

[00:23:55] [SPEAKER_00]: Let me find it because it gives me a hard time.

[00:23:57] [SPEAKER_03]: I don't need to be an asshole right here.

[00:24:01] [SPEAKER_03]: This is in the second paragraph.

[00:24:03] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh yeah, so far away.

[00:24:05] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, okay.

[00:24:06] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah.

[00:24:07] [SPEAKER_03]: Continue please.

[00:24:08] [SPEAKER_03]: Sorry, I'm sorry.

[00:24:09] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, it's fine.

[00:24:10] [SPEAKER_00]: So it says they dive into the cardboard tubes and

[00:24:13] [SPEAKER_00]: cloth hides I've set up for them.

[00:24:15] [SPEAKER_00]: Would cloth scraps be better?

[00:24:18] [SPEAKER_00]: Like imagine cloth hides like hide is

[00:24:22] [SPEAKER_00]: like leather off of an animal.

[00:24:25] [SPEAKER_00]: You know, a cloth hide seems strange to me.

[00:24:30] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I'm kind of with you on that.

[00:24:31] [SPEAKER_03]: I feel like it could have been like cloth scraps.

[00:24:34] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, just like crap clothes and stuff, you know,

[00:24:36] [SPEAKER_03]: unless it's meaning like cloth hide as in like hide is in

[00:24:40] [SPEAKER_03]: like a like a deer hide.

[00:24:44] [SPEAKER_03]: No, no, that's like a hunting hide.

[00:24:46] [SPEAKER_03]: You know, like the little like shelter you make to hide

[00:24:48] [SPEAKER_03]: in the from like the hide and like shelter into like

[00:24:53] [SPEAKER_03]: because I think I think that's a blind.

[00:24:55] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh, that's yeah.

[00:24:57] [SPEAKER_03]: Okay.

[00:24:57] [SPEAKER_03]: That's what it.

[00:24:57] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, you're right.

[00:24:58] [SPEAKER_03]: So yeah, no, I'll see.

[00:25:00] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I feel like like cloth scrap would be better than

[00:25:03] [SPEAKER_03]: then cloth hide.

[00:25:04] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:25:05] [SPEAKER_00]: It's very strange.

[00:25:08] [SPEAKER_03]: Hang on.

[00:25:09] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm just am I sorry.

[00:25:12] [SPEAKER_03]: I don't mean to like be.

[00:25:14] [SPEAKER_00]: This is discussion podcast.

[00:25:16] [SPEAKER_00]: So we are discussing.

[00:25:18] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm just going to like look up the word definitions

[00:25:20] [SPEAKER_03]: and meanings for hides.

[00:25:23] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm going to specifically look up cloth hide.

[00:25:27] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:25:27] [SPEAKER_00]: It just seems weird.

[00:25:32] [SPEAKER_05]: Maybe has a bunch of dead sack boys.

[00:25:36] [SPEAKER_05]: God, yeah.

[00:25:37] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, that makes sense.

[00:25:38] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, I'm fine with that.

[00:25:42] [SPEAKER_00]: Apparently cloth and hide is a brand.

[00:25:47] [SPEAKER_00]: So yeah, I don't know.

[00:25:48] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, like hide.

[00:25:49] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:25:49] [SPEAKER_03]: Like the closest I'm seeing right now is like a hidey hole

[00:25:52] [SPEAKER_03]: hide out.

[00:25:53] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh, hang on.

[00:25:55] [SPEAKER_03]: No.

[00:25:59] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm not seeing anything for like specifically for like,

[00:26:03] [SPEAKER_03]: they call it a hide for like a shelter or something like that.

[00:26:08] [SPEAKER_00]: So maybe in regards to cloth hides,

[00:26:12] [SPEAKER_00]: it just means he's made like little tents and stuff out of

[00:26:15] [SPEAKER_00]: like t-shirts and shit for them to like go in and play in.

[00:26:19] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:26:20] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm not anything to be like, yeah, like basically a piece of

[00:26:23] [SPEAKER_03]: fabric or like cloth to like basically just create a

[00:26:25] [SPEAKER_03]: like a, like you said a tent or something like almost like a

[00:26:28] [SPEAKER_03]: tent like thing for them.

[00:26:30] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:26:30] [SPEAKER_03]: But it's probably more or less means like a scrap of cloth,

[00:26:36] [SPEAKER_03]: not a hide of cloth.

[00:26:37] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:26:40] [SPEAKER_03]: Audience, you liking this really in depth like searching

[00:26:44] [SPEAKER_03]: for the meaning of words grammar.

[00:26:46] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, it's so great.

[00:26:48] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:26:52] [SPEAKER_00]: But it's fine.

[00:26:53] [SPEAKER_00]: We'll move on.

[00:26:54] [SPEAKER_00]: Okay.

[00:26:56] [SPEAKER_00]: My next one is just in regards to the location of a paragraph

[00:27:00] [SPEAKER_00]: break.

[00:27:01] [SPEAKER_00]: I feel like it's better otherwise.

[00:27:04] [SPEAKER_00]: So I'll read it as it is.

[00:27:06] [SPEAKER_00]: I may have, this is in regards to him seeing the creature for

[00:27:10] [SPEAKER_00]: the first time in the tree.

[00:27:13] [SPEAKER_00]: I may have stood there for hours,

[00:27:15] [SPEAKER_00]: at least long enough for the light to change.

[00:27:17] [SPEAKER_00]: Then it goes into a paragraph.

[00:27:19] [SPEAKER_00]: Eventually it clicked that it was part of a dead animal.

[00:27:21] [SPEAKER_00]: I wouldn't know exactly what until years later when it,

[00:27:25] [SPEAKER_00]: I worked at a nature reserve put roadkill for vultures

[00:27:30] [SPEAKER_00]: and stood there a little longer before blah, blah, blah, blah.

[00:27:33] [SPEAKER_00]: Personally, I think the paragraph break should be after

[00:27:36] [SPEAKER_00]: mentioning that Nair worked at the nature reserve.

[00:27:38] [SPEAKER_00]: I kind of feel it flows better since it's switching to

[00:27:41] [SPEAKER_00]: a new scene there.

[00:27:43] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:27:44] [SPEAKER_00]: So it would be, I may have stood there for hours,

[00:27:46] [SPEAKER_00]: at least long enough for the light to change.

[00:27:47] [SPEAKER_00]: Eventually it clicked that it was part of a dead animal.

[00:27:50] [SPEAKER_00]: I wouldn't know exactly until years later when I worked at a

[00:27:53] [SPEAKER_00]: nature reserve and put out roadkill for the vultures.

[00:27:56] [SPEAKER_00]: Period.

[00:27:57] [SPEAKER_00]: New line.

[00:27:57] [SPEAKER_00]: I stood there for a little longer before blah, blah, blah, blah.

[00:28:00] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:28:01] [SPEAKER_03]: No, I like that.

[00:28:02] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:28:04] [SPEAKER_03]: That works a little bit more coherently.

[00:28:08] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:28:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I always have a problem with paragraph breaks when it

[00:28:13] [SPEAKER_00]: switches before the scene switches.

[00:28:16] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:28:17] [SPEAKER_03]: Also, I just have to bring this up.

[00:28:19] [SPEAKER_03]: So when you're talking about he stood there for hours,

[00:28:21] [SPEAKER_03]: at least until the light changed.

[00:28:24] [SPEAKER_01]: Oh, I got no one on it.

[00:28:25] [SPEAKER_03]: When I read that, I initially thought like the light of day.

[00:28:29] [SPEAKER_03]: But then I kind of thought, then I like,

[00:28:31] [SPEAKER_03]: I reread the story last night for in preparation for this.

[00:28:34] [SPEAKER_03]: And I was like, or is that like until the light of like the

[00:28:37] [SPEAKER_03]: streetlight changed?

[00:28:38] [SPEAKER_03]: Because like he's, like this is like on his walk to school.

[00:28:42] [SPEAKER_03]: So like he was there for like a,

[00:28:45] [SPEAKER_03]: for what seemed like hours to him,

[00:28:48] [SPEAKER_03]: but like that's just an exaggeration in the writing.

[00:28:51] [SPEAKER_03]: But is it actually like,

[00:28:52] [SPEAKER_03]: or until like the light changed for like the traffic light

[00:28:55] [SPEAKER_03]: nearby?

[00:28:58] [SPEAKER_01]: I don't know.

[00:28:58] [SPEAKER_01]: Like if he was in a car.

[00:29:00] [SPEAKER_03]: No, no, no, like, like walk it like light change for like

[00:29:03] [SPEAKER_03]: the cross, the road kind of thing.

[00:29:05] [SPEAKER_03]: I might be just overthinking it or like maybe like I'm just

[00:29:08] [SPEAKER_00]: like, yeah, I don't think he would have been noticing

[00:29:12] [SPEAKER_00]: that mean while he's while he's transfixed on staring

[00:29:16] [SPEAKER_00]: at this.

[00:29:17] [SPEAKER_03]: Maybe you're right.

[00:29:19] [SPEAKER_00]: I don't know.

[00:29:22] [SPEAKER_05]: It's one of those things where this is more when you're a kid.

[00:29:29] [SPEAKER_05]: So when you're out playing in the sun and then all of a sudden

[00:29:34] [SPEAKER_05]: it's dark.

[00:29:35] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, because you don't realize how much fun you're having

[00:29:38] [SPEAKER_03]: into and then like the time goes by much faster.

[00:29:42] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:29:42] [SPEAKER_05]: Yeah.

[00:29:46] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:29:46] [SPEAKER_03]: And again, like this is obviously like like it could also

[00:29:50] [SPEAKER_03]: it this the way the story like says that it's also like kind

[00:29:52] [SPEAKER_03]: of like flowery or like exaggerated.

[00:29:56] [SPEAKER_03]: But yeah,

[00:29:57] [SPEAKER_00]: I guess the writer would say they would know better but

[00:30:02] [SPEAKER_00]: regardless, I'll move on from here.

[00:30:06] [SPEAKER_00]: This is describing the creature.

[00:30:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I think the second time.

[00:30:14] [SPEAKER_00]: No, this is the first time.

[00:30:16] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, because the deer rips.

[00:30:17] [SPEAKER_00]: Okay.

[00:30:17] [SPEAKER_00]: First time.

[00:30:19] [SPEAKER_00]: The same curiosity that got me to stare at the deer ribs urged

[00:30:23] [SPEAKER_00]: me to turn back around in the direction of the smell.

[00:30:27] [SPEAKER_00]: It wore no skins.

[00:30:29] [SPEAKER_00]: I kind of feel like it's saying it wore no skin would sound

[00:30:34] [SPEAKER_00]: better because saying the plural of skins sounds like you're

[00:30:38] [SPEAKER_00]: saying that this creature is just new to not wearing clothes.

[00:30:44] [SPEAKER_03]: I guess but then it does kind of explain what it means

[00:30:47] [SPEAKER_03]: by that.

[00:30:48] [SPEAKER_00]: Here's the thing though.

[00:30:49] [SPEAKER_00]: Later on, this thing actually is wearing skins.

[00:30:54] [SPEAKER_00]: It's literally wearing a coat made of skins.

[00:30:58] [SPEAKER_03]: No, that's specifically though it doesn't wear skins like it

[00:31:01] [SPEAKER_03]: does what it does.

[00:31:02] [SPEAKER_03]: It doesn't use the pelt of the animals or the skins of it.

[00:31:05] [SPEAKER_03]: They use the muscle and sinew and bone.

[00:31:08] [SPEAKER_03]: It doesn't use the skin at all.

[00:31:09] [SPEAKER_03]: It specifically says that.

[00:31:12] [SPEAKER_03]: Right.

[00:31:13] [SPEAKER_03]: Fuck.

[00:31:15] [SPEAKER_03]: The coat, the flesh coat is not made of skin of the skin of

[00:31:19] [SPEAKER_03]: the animals.

[00:31:19] [SPEAKER_03]: It's made of the flesh and muscle and sinew and bone.

[00:31:23] [SPEAKER_03]: It's not made from the skin of the animals.

[00:31:26] [SPEAKER_03]: Right.

[00:31:29] [SPEAKER_00]: However, that's only described later.

[00:31:32] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:31:32] [SPEAKER_03]: I can see like it's like it wore no skin.

[00:31:35] [SPEAKER_03]: I think also like I think you could use it.

[00:31:38] [SPEAKER_03]: Honestly for me, I could take it or leave it like it

[00:31:40] [SPEAKER_03]: wore no skins or it wore no skin.

[00:31:43] [SPEAKER_00]: Actually, no, I'm wrong.

[00:31:44] [SPEAKER_03]: Okay.

[00:31:45] [SPEAKER_00]: Because it says it says it wore no skins then immediately

[00:31:47] [SPEAKER_00]: it says it had instead it had a model coat of pink.

[00:31:51] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah.

[00:31:52] [SPEAKER_00]: Hand like tassels blah, blah, blah, blah, blah.

[00:31:54] [SPEAKER_03]: Shredded muscle and varying stages of I actually have

[00:31:56] [SPEAKER_03]: this like I'm going to be quoting this in a second

[00:31:59] [SPEAKER_03]: in my actual thoughts.

[00:32:01] [SPEAKER_01]: Okay.

[00:32:03] [SPEAKER_03]: Again, like you're not like 100% wrong.

[00:32:07] [SPEAKER_03]: Like again, it could be either or honestly.

[00:32:14] [SPEAKER_00]: So maybe it's like maybe it wouldn't have been so strange

[00:32:19] [SPEAKER_00]: if it said like it wore it wore a coat but not of skins.

[00:32:29] [SPEAKER_00]: Instead, it was made of blah, blah, blah, blah.

[00:32:32] [SPEAKER_00]: It's saying it wore no skins is what really gives you.

[00:32:35] [SPEAKER_00]: Maybe it had no skin.

[00:32:37] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, but we don't know if it had no skin or not.

[00:32:39] [SPEAKER_00]: That's true.

[00:32:40] [SPEAKER_00]: No, actually it's just bones and shit.

[00:32:42] [SPEAKER_00]: It doesn't have skin.

[00:32:43] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, it's like yeah, it is just it is the everything underneath

[00:32:47] [SPEAKER_03]: the skin is what was exposed.

[00:32:51] [SPEAKER_03]: Underneath the coat?

[00:32:52] [SPEAKER_03]: No, even the coat the coat itself is like made from like

[00:32:55] [SPEAKER_03]: shredded muscle and yes in you and some of that.

[00:32:58] [SPEAKER_00]: So yeah, but the creature wearing the coat is just made

[00:33:01] [SPEAKER_00]: of flesh and bone no skin.

[00:33:03] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:33:03] [SPEAKER_00]: So yeah, if it said that wore no skin period.

[00:33:07] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah.

[00:33:07] [SPEAKER_00]: Then that would make a little bit more sense in my opinion.

[00:33:10] [SPEAKER_03]: Also this thing is like who's to say what is this thing

[00:33:13] [SPEAKER_03]: like this thing on the inside like its arms are made

[00:33:16] [SPEAKER_03]: from like are woven from like tails from animal tails.

[00:33:20] [SPEAKER_03]: So like.

[00:33:22] [SPEAKER_00]: Well, that's part of the coat.

[00:33:23] [SPEAKER_00]: He's like puffing that from inside.

[00:33:26] [SPEAKER_03]: Maybe see I just assume this whole creature is just

[00:33:27] [SPEAKER_03]: the coat and the flesh coat.

[00:33:30] [SPEAKER_00]: I imagined it's basically a skeleton with like haphazardly

[00:33:36] [SPEAKER_00]: pieces of meat on it and its face is just mushed up

[00:33:41] [SPEAKER_00]: rotten meat and it's wearing a coat made of others other

[00:33:44] [SPEAKER_00]: shit.

[00:33:44] [SPEAKER_03]: You know what I was thinking actually of this was it

[00:33:48] [SPEAKER_03]: and this is going to piss off one of our one of our

[00:33:50] [SPEAKER_03]: listeners.

[00:33:51] [SPEAKER_03]: Sorry, Brownie do it this reference this this

[00:33:55] [SPEAKER_03]: reminded me of a warframe thing.

[00:33:56] [SPEAKER_01]: Hell yeah.

[00:33:58] [SPEAKER_03]: I always I think I should be the day.

[00:34:01] [SPEAKER_03]: No, no, no, I envisioned a roadkill like a

[00:34:05] [SPEAKER_03]: fleshless a skinless vert a skinless roadkill version

[00:34:10] [SPEAKER_03]: of Sevagoths shadow.

[00:34:13] [SPEAKER_03]: Oh yeah, because he has like a shadow like the

[00:34:17] [SPEAKER_03]: and for anybody the war in Sevagoth in Warframe is

[00:34:21] [SPEAKER_03]: this character that has basically like a Jojo

[00:34:24] [SPEAKER_03]: esque like coat monster on top of him.

[00:34:28] [SPEAKER_03]: So I just kind of a vision of him.

[00:34:31] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I did separate and like act on so and so

[00:34:33] [SPEAKER_03]: I was just envisioning the coat as this monster but

[00:34:36] [SPEAKER_03]: like made from like woven like animal tails and

[00:34:40] [SPEAKER_03]: like just shredded animal muscle and sinew and bone

[00:34:46] [SPEAKER_03]: which I'll say I like I want to draw this creature

[00:34:49] [SPEAKER_03]: so bad the way I'm seeing it.

[00:34:51] [SPEAKER_03]: But like it's going to be so much detail.

[00:34:55] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, it'll be a task for sure today.

[00:34:59] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, because like it's like there's so much

[00:35:01] [SPEAKER_03]: like detail involved for like the all the for all

[00:35:05] [SPEAKER_03]: like the shrimp and crustacean like tails for like

[00:35:08] [SPEAKER_03]: that almost look like armor on the one side of it.

[00:35:10] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, yeah, like and all of it is described in

[00:35:13] [SPEAKER_00]: like glorious detail so like there's not much room

[00:35:17] [SPEAKER_00]: for just like artist interpretation of it right.

[00:35:20] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, exactly.

[00:35:21] [SPEAKER_03]: Well, yeah, there's detail but you there's also

[00:35:23] [SPEAKER_03]: some interpretation because you can like play around

[00:35:25] [SPEAKER_03]: with like what kind of animals it's using.

[00:35:27] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah.

[00:35:29] [SPEAKER_03]: This is we're not even out of the we're not even

[00:35:31] [SPEAKER_03]: in the actual thoughts by the way guys.

[00:35:32] [SPEAKER_00]: No, I mean that happens sometimes when we bring up

[00:35:34] [SPEAKER_00]: stuff that we have direct actual actual thoughts on

[00:35:37] [SPEAKER_00]: and it's like we just dip our toes into that a little bit.

[00:35:40] [SPEAKER_03]: Yeah, I guess I guess this is all to say that like

[00:35:41] [SPEAKER_03]: I really like dug at this like whereas you were

[00:35:44] [SPEAKER_03]: having a problem with like it wore no skins

[00:35:46] [SPEAKER_03]: and so that's where you kind of like for this part

[00:35:48] [SPEAKER_03]: but like honestly this whole description that we

[00:35:50] [SPEAKER_03]: get after that like I really enjoyed.

[00:35:53] [SPEAKER_00]: Oh yeah, the description is great.

[00:35:54] [SPEAKER_00]: It's just the very the very start of it.

[00:35:57] [SPEAKER_00]: I wasn't I wasn't sure because I didn't know if it

[00:36:00] [SPEAKER_00]: was skinless until late much later on.

[00:36:03] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, when we should have gotten the visual immediately

[00:36:05] [SPEAKER_00]: in my opinion but that's fine.

[00:36:07] [SPEAKER_00]: Yeah, can I move on?

[00:36:10] [SPEAKER_02]: Yes, we good.

[00:36:11] [SPEAKER_00]: We good.

[00:36:12] [SPEAKER_00]: Okay.

[00:36:14] [SPEAKER_00]: It's next one is when he's talking about his nature

[00:36:17] [SPEAKER_00]: job his nature job is pretty neat.

[00:36:21] [SPEAKER_00]: I eventually clicked that it was part of a dead animal.

[00:36:24] [SPEAKER_00]: I would know exactly until years later when I worked

[00:36:27] [SPEAKER_00]: at nature reserve put Roe kill of Vulture and blah blah blah

[00:36:29] [SPEAKER_00]: and like a few lines later it says maybe a few paragraphs

[00:36:34] [SPEAKER_00]: either way later on the story it says the second

[00:36:36] [SPEAKER_00]: time I saw it I the second time I saw it was

[00:36:39] [SPEAKER_00]: working at the nature reserve I spent a few years

[00:36:41] [SPEAKER_00]: hauling Roe kill to the Vulture fields to make

[00:36:43] [SPEAKER_00]: sure they didn't get blah blah blah blah.

[00:36:44] [SPEAKER_00]: So like it says the exact same thing just slightly

[00:36:47] [SPEAKER_00]: worded differently again.

[00:36:49] [SPEAKER_00]: Like even going into detail saying that he's putting

[00:36:52] [SPEAKER_00]: out Roe kill of Vulture like we already know that

[00:36:54] [SPEAKER_00]: the first time.

[00:36:55] [SPEAKER_03]: We know that he well yeah we but we didn't I guess

[00:36:59] [SPEAKER_03]: like it's sort of like he's bringing it up that

[00:37:02] [SPEAKER_03]: like I wouldn't know what this was until like later

[00:37:04] [SPEAKER_03]: on in my life and then like here's when this

[00:37:07] [SPEAKER_03]: thing happened again during that time in my

[00:37:09] [SPEAKER_03]: life I mentioned earlier.

[00:37:10] [SPEAKER_00]: Yes, but he goes into detail saying exactly

[00:37:14] [SPEAKER_00]: what he does both times meanwhile he doesn't

[00:37:16] [SPEAKER_00]: have to I guess because it's just sort of repeating

[00:37:19] [SPEAKER_00]: it so like the way that I would do it is the first

[00:37:24] [SPEAKER_00]: line the first time you mentioned it say I would

[00:37:26] [SPEAKER_00]: know exactly what until years later when I was

[00:37:29] [SPEAKER_00]: working at a nature reserve period you don't

[00:37:31] [SPEAKER_00]: need to say what you're doing at the nature

[00:37:33] [SPEAKER_00]: reserve just saying years later that's that's

[00:37:36] [SPEAKER_00]: what I was doing and then when you bring it

[00:37:38] [SPEAKER_00]: up later then you go in saying the second

[00:37:41] [SPEAKER_00]: time I saw it I was working at nature

[00:37:42] [SPEAKER_00]: reserve levels hauling Roe kill to the

[00:37:45] [SPEAKER_00]: vulture fields to make sure they didn't eat

[00:37:47] [SPEAKER_00]: stuff on the roadside you're giving us more

[00:37:49] [SPEAKER_00]: information but you're not having to repeat

[00:37:52] [SPEAKER_00]: the same information because you just told us

[00:37:54] [SPEAKER_00]: a little bit at the start so we don't need

[00:37:55] [SPEAKER_00]: a full description both times.

[00:37:58] [SPEAKER_03]: Okay yeah I can agree I can I can I can

[00:38:01] [SPEAKER_03]: I can agree with that yeah.

[00:38:03] [SPEAKER_00]: Okay then we get into the baby bird eyes

[00:38:08] [SPEAKER_00]: on the face situation and it says five

[00:38:11] [SPEAKER_00]: baby birds now five pink and blue swollen

[00:38:15] [SPEAKER_00]: eyes shouldn't it be ten eyes because birds

[00:38:18] [SPEAKER_00]: have two eyes each or is he like sideways

[00:38:22] [SPEAKER_03]: mashing them in I think I think he's just

[00:38:24] [SPEAKER_03]: using the like the the heads directly as

[00:38:27] [SPEAKER_00]: eyes yes but yeah yes but if he's putting

[00:38:32] [SPEAKER_00]: the heads in sideways then yes only one eye

[00:38:35] [SPEAKER_00]: showing but if like the beaks are out

[00:38:37] [SPEAKER_00]: then each head has two eyes I mean

[00:38:41] [SPEAKER_03]: this who knows how this creature act

[00:38:43] [SPEAKER_00]: like works like yeah I just thought about

[00:38:46] [SPEAKER_00]: the orientation sideways possibility now

[00:38:48] [SPEAKER_00]: so maybe he is jamming the one eye against

[00:38:52] [SPEAKER_00]: his face and using the other one to

[00:38:54] [SPEAKER_00]: actually look out so they are five and

[00:38:57] [SPEAKER_00]: just all the beaks are facing inwards

[00:38:58] [SPEAKER_00]: or outwards but not directly in the

[00:39:01] [SPEAKER_03]: direction he's looking or even more

[00:39:03] [SPEAKER_03]: fucked up he's actually not even using

[00:39:05] [SPEAKER_03]: the eyes of the birds he's using the

[00:39:06] [SPEAKER_03]: open beaks like and every time the

[00:39:09] [SPEAKER_03]: beaks open up that's how he's seeing

[00:39:10] [SPEAKER_03]: is through the mouth like it's a weird

[00:39:14] [SPEAKER_03]: like it's a weird like supernatural

[00:39:15] [SPEAKER_03]: like vision that he uses like he uses

[00:39:18] [SPEAKER_03]: the beaks as like eyelids no I think he

[00:39:22] [SPEAKER_00]: is physically using the organs like

[00:39:25] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah the eye the ocular organ of the

[00:39:28] [SPEAKER_00]: bird okay yeah and like because it seems

[00:39:31] [SPEAKER_00]: like he has to replace them when they

[00:39:32] [SPEAKER_00]: go bad or something like that because

[00:39:34] [SPEAKER_00]: like shit rots you know yeah he's a

[00:39:36] [SPEAKER_03]: carry on he he's the carry on coat

[00:39:39] [SPEAKER_00]: pretty much so yeah maybe he just slams

[00:39:43] [SPEAKER_00]: them in sideways so that's fine okay so

[00:39:46] [SPEAKER_00]: I do have a bit of a note on this whole

[00:39:47] [SPEAKER_00]: thing like did the creature not think to

[00:39:50] [SPEAKER_00]: give itself eyes these entire time

[00:39:52] [SPEAKER_00]: like it's made this fancy coat of like

[00:39:54] [SPEAKER_00]: skins both arms like seemingly like

[00:39:57] [SPEAKER_00]: hundreds of dead animals like it did

[00:39:59] [SPEAKER_00]: all of that while blind you're

[00:40:03] [SPEAKER_03]: you're like I you're assuming that it

[00:40:05] [SPEAKER_03]: works like us like it might have other

[00:40:07] [SPEAKER_03]: like it could be like Shagothian where

[00:40:09] [SPEAKER_03]: it like it has like other senses that it

[00:40:12] [SPEAKER_03]: can rely on when it when it when when

[00:40:14] [SPEAKER_03]: other one other senses fail so I guess

[00:40:19] [SPEAKER_00]: maybe doesn't need the eyes but it like

[00:40:22] [SPEAKER_00]: it's built a face just because it kept

[00:40:26] [SPEAKER_00]: contacting with Nair who has eyes and

[00:40:28] [SPEAKER_00]: a mouth honestly that's why yeah

[00:40:30] [SPEAKER_00]: he's basically just putting on a disguise

[00:40:33] [SPEAKER_00]: to make it him be able to connect more

[00:40:35] [SPEAKER_03]: with there hence why at the end it

[00:40:38] [SPEAKER_03]: now it's able to smile at Nair to show

[00:40:40] [SPEAKER_03]: that's appreciation with human molders

[00:40:43] [SPEAKER_03]: that's fine it's a buddy or dude this is

[00:40:46] [SPEAKER_03]: 100% a buddy horror oh for sure yeah

[00:40:49] [SPEAKER_00]: unless he dies at the end but who knows

[00:40:51] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah hey it didn't happen at the end of

[00:40:53] [SPEAKER_03]: the like it left it ambiguous so like I'm

[00:40:56] [SPEAKER_03]: going on the assumption that Nair has

[00:40:59] [SPEAKER_03]: gone insane and is now buddies with

[00:41:01] [SPEAKER_03]: this with this horrible monster creature

[00:41:03] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm fine with that yeah

[00:41:05] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah moving on got another one

[00:41:06] [SPEAKER_00]: another paragraph break that I didn't like

[00:41:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I don't explain anything

[00:41:12] [SPEAKER_00]: or sorry I don't expect anything from it

[00:41:14] [SPEAKER_00]: I started setting out animal corpses

[00:41:18] [SPEAKER_00]: out of curiosity now I feel like I'm just

[00:41:20] [SPEAKER_00]: helping it clean up what vultures and

[00:41:22] [SPEAKER_00]: other scavengers miss period new

[00:41:25] [SPEAKER_00]: paragraph tomato night mice are a treat

[00:41:28] [SPEAKER_00]: they're beautiful inside period outside

[00:41:31] [SPEAKER_00]: a outside the wooden steps creek

[00:41:34] [SPEAKER_00]: blah blah blah so personally I feel like

[00:41:37] [SPEAKER_00]: a better paragraph break would be when

[00:41:39] [SPEAKER_00]: it says outside because it's switching to

[00:41:41] [SPEAKER_00]: outside yeah yeah it's like it's directly

[00:41:47] [SPEAKER_00]: talking about he's putting out corpses

[00:41:49] [SPEAKER_00]: and saying like tomato my sir treat so

[00:41:52] [SPEAKER_00]: like that's a complete thing that you're

[00:41:54] [SPEAKER_00]: talking about then you switch to

[00:41:57] [SPEAKER_00]: outside there's something happening

[00:41:59] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah I'm with you on that I think

[00:42:02] [SPEAKER_03]: outside would have been a better

[00:42:03] [SPEAKER_03]: choice for the start of that paragraph

[00:42:05] [SPEAKER_00]: mm-hmm yeah and then the last one is

[00:42:08] [SPEAKER_00]: just I personally would prefer ellipses

[00:42:11] [SPEAKER_00]: here over a period just for emphasis

[00:42:14] [SPEAKER_00]: tell me if I'm right or not I wave when

[00:42:18] [SPEAKER_00]: it lifts its face to look at me with

[00:42:20] [SPEAKER_00]: its baby bird head eyes it has added to

[00:42:24] [SPEAKER_00]: itself wait that should be

[00:42:27] [SPEAKER_00]: Comma to actually as well okay I got

[00:42:33] [SPEAKER_00]: it lifts its face to look at me with

[00:42:35] [SPEAKER_00]: its baby bird eyes period and then

[00:42:37] [SPEAKER_00]: starts off again saying it added to

[00:42:40] [SPEAKER_03]: itself sorry that's good job but just

[00:42:42] [SPEAKER_03]: say you didn't leave out a word where

[00:42:44] [SPEAKER_03]: baby bird head eyes whatever I'm trying

[00:42:49] [SPEAKER_00]: to get through this I'm sorry I'm

[00:42:51] [SPEAKER_00]: sorry either way it adds to itself

[00:42:54] [SPEAKER_00]: since it's last been here period an

[00:42:57] [SPEAKER_00]: open smile of human molars period so

[00:43:00] [SPEAKER_00]: like it there are three really short

[00:43:02] [SPEAKER_00]: sentences that I feel like should be

[00:43:03] [SPEAKER_00]: connected better okay so personally the

[00:43:05] [SPEAKER_00]: way I would do it is the first period

[00:43:07] [SPEAKER_00]: should be a comma and then the second

[00:43:09] [SPEAKER_00]: period should be an ellipses for

[00:43:10] [SPEAKER_00]: emphasis so it would be I wave when

[00:43:13] [SPEAKER_00]: ellipses face to me to look at me with

[00:43:15] [SPEAKER_00]: his baby bird head eyes that it had

[00:43:18] [SPEAKER_00]: added to itself since it's last

[00:43:19] [SPEAKER_00]: been here an open oh wait no because

[00:43:23] [SPEAKER_00]: it now and I was in the baby no

[00:43:27] [SPEAKER_03]: because because it hit that actually

[00:43:28] [SPEAKER_03]: wasn't like the baby had like it's

[00:43:31] [SPEAKER_00]: not connected yeah it's yeah um because

[00:43:34] [SPEAKER_00]: it talks about the baby bird eyes and

[00:43:36] [SPEAKER_00]: then stops and then the rest of it is

[00:43:38] [SPEAKER_00]: talking about the molars yes it has

[00:43:41] [SPEAKER_00]: added something new to itself since

[00:43:43] [SPEAKER_00]: it's last been here an open smile of

[00:43:45] [SPEAKER_00]: human molars but either way I feel

[00:43:47] [SPEAKER_00]: like an ellipses there for emphasis

[00:43:49] [SPEAKER_03]: would be nice I would I know honestly

[00:43:51] [SPEAKER_03]: none ellipses I would even go to

[00:43:53] [SPEAKER_03]: say that that period at the end there

[00:43:55] [SPEAKER_03]: like right before we get an open

[00:43:57] [SPEAKER_03]: smile of human molars could be a

[00:43:59] [SPEAKER_03]: semicolon yeah or is it

[00:44:04] [SPEAKER_03]: the colon is our is colon or semicolon

[00:44:05] [SPEAKER_03]: the dot and the two dots which one's

[00:44:08] [SPEAKER_03]: that is that that's colon yes sorry I

[00:44:10] [SPEAKER_03]: think maybe a colon at the end of

[00:44:13] [SPEAKER_03]: at the end of that last sentence

[00:44:15] [SPEAKER_03]: there right before open smile of

[00:44:16] [SPEAKER_03]: human molars just like normally

[00:44:18] [SPEAKER_03]: like a list or or to like present

[00:44:21] [SPEAKER_03]: something like perhaps yeah I guess

[00:44:25] [SPEAKER_03]: ellipses would also I think could

[00:44:26] [SPEAKER_03]: also work but like I don't like I

[00:44:28] [SPEAKER_03]: think also when you do it's like

[00:44:30] [SPEAKER_03]: when you're about to like name off

[00:44:32] [SPEAKER_03]: something or like say something like

[00:44:34] [SPEAKER_03]: that I would put a colon rather than

[00:44:36] [SPEAKER_03]: like a period so yeah the period

[00:44:39] [SPEAKER_03]: definitely is not I would definitely

[00:44:41] [SPEAKER_03]: maybe change the period there I'm

[00:44:45] [SPEAKER_03]: just not sure exactly what I would

[00:44:46] [SPEAKER_03]: use like I'd have to like maybe I

[00:44:49] [SPEAKER_03]: have some choices I guess if I was

[00:44:51] [SPEAKER_03]: if I was writing this

[00:44:55] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah the whole mention of like the

[00:44:57] [SPEAKER_00]: baby bird head eyes period and then

[00:44:59] [SPEAKER_00]: it starts with it had added to itself

[00:45:01] [SPEAKER_00]: since kind of sounds like it's still

[00:45:04] [SPEAKER_00]: talking but the baby bird head eyes

[00:45:06] [SPEAKER_03]: but it's not maybe it has also added

[00:45:08] [SPEAKER_03]: or it is also yeah it is also

[00:45:10] [SPEAKER_00]: something new it has added to itself

[00:45:13] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah yeah or also

[00:45:15] [SPEAKER_00]: something new that has added to

[00:45:17] [SPEAKER_00]: itself to like differentiate that we're

[00:45:19] [SPEAKER_00]: talking about something new here yeah

[00:45:23] [SPEAKER_03]: I get you yeah okay I am done

[00:45:26] [SPEAKER_00]: talking about my questionable

[00:45:28] [SPEAKER_00]: choices in the grammar and yellow

[00:45:31] [SPEAKER_03]: that's fine we also to be fair this

[00:45:33] [SPEAKER_03]: was also a bit of an actual thoughts too

[00:45:35] [SPEAKER_03]: so like as we couldn't help ourselves I

[00:45:38] [SPEAKER_00]: couldn't help myself I mean that's fine

[00:45:40] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah so I'm not gonna my so we move

[00:45:44] [SPEAKER_03]: on to the actual thoughts and I'm

[00:45:45] [SPEAKER_03]: actually not going to bring up what I

[00:45:46] [SPEAKER_03]: had originally which was like that

[00:45:48] [SPEAKER_03]: whole quote of like it has it wore no

[00:45:51] [SPEAKER_03]: skins blah blah just basically what a

[00:45:53] [SPEAKER_03]: refrain rephrasing what I said earlier

[00:45:55] [SPEAKER_03]: I really like the description of that

[00:45:58] [SPEAKER_03]: like it's just such a cool flesh coat

[00:46:00] [SPEAKER_03]: description yes pretty sick yeah

[00:46:03] [SPEAKER_03]: however I will be referencing other

[00:46:05] [SPEAKER_03]: quotes that are just continuing my like

[00:46:07] [SPEAKER_03]: I love this description and stuff like

[00:46:09] [SPEAKER_03]: that so starting with this one here

[00:46:11] [SPEAKER_00]: I'll say this before you continue

[00:46:13] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm surprised that like because the

[00:46:17] [SPEAKER_00]: description is done so well I didn't at

[00:46:20] [SPEAKER_00]: all like take it in a silly manner

[00:46:22] [SPEAKER_00]: even though you could so easily do that

[00:46:25] [SPEAKER_00]: with the subject material but like it's

[00:46:27] [SPEAKER_00]: done so well and like the visual is

[00:46:30] [SPEAKER_00]: hammered down that no this is fucked up

[00:46:32] [SPEAKER_00]: and weird that you don't even think about

[00:46:34] [SPEAKER_00]: it yeah like even me reading this

[00:46:37] [SPEAKER_00]: specifically to do a show on I'm like

[00:46:39] [SPEAKER_00]: no this is fucked up I'm not even going

[00:46:41] [SPEAKER_03]: there really nare's response is pretty

[00:46:43] [SPEAKER_03]: accurate like he went into a fugue state

[00:46:46] [SPEAKER_03]: initially and then at the sudden sound

[00:46:48] [SPEAKER_03]: of like the branch snapping he ran

[00:46:51] [SPEAKER_03]: and then second time he encountered

[00:46:54] [SPEAKER_03]: the creature and it didn't it wasn't

[00:46:56] [SPEAKER_03]: threatening to him so he stayed out of

[00:46:58] [SPEAKER_03]: out of like horrified curiosity until

[00:47:02] [SPEAKER_03]: like the creature left and then he just

[00:47:03] [SPEAKER_03]: like went home didn't go to back to work

[00:47:06] [SPEAKER_03]: just went home to rethink his life

[00:47:07] [SPEAKER_03]: like he had rolled a couple of sand

[00:47:09] [SPEAKER_03]: checks at that and I think at that

[00:47:13] [SPEAKER_03]: point he had failed a bunch of sand

[00:47:14] [SPEAKER_03]: checks and basically kind of snapped

[00:47:18] [SPEAKER_03]: and it decided to like kind of be

[00:47:21] [SPEAKER_03]: the Elliott to this creatures ET

[00:47:23] [SPEAKER_03]: the extraterrestrial because that's kind

[00:47:27] [SPEAKER_03]: of what I got from the creatures like

[00:47:28] [SPEAKER_03]: from what him giving like like putting

[00:47:30] [SPEAKER_03]: food putting the meat like the flesh

[00:47:33] [SPEAKER_03]: out on his porch it's very I was sort

[00:47:36] [SPEAKER_03]: of reminded of like a more morbid version

[00:47:38] [SPEAKER_03]: of like in ET the extraterrestrial

[00:47:40] [SPEAKER_03]: Elliott puts down like candies to

[00:47:44] [SPEAKER_03]: bring ET closer to into the house

[00:47:46] [SPEAKER_03]: and some of that to like be friends

[00:47:48] [SPEAKER_03]: with it and like it's kind of like

[00:47:49] [SPEAKER_03]: that except way more creepy and morbid

[00:47:52] [SPEAKER_00]: it's played mice

[00:47:53] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah exactly

[00:47:55] [SPEAKER_03]: I also love the description of like he

[00:47:57] [SPEAKER_03]: was like he's even created like little

[00:47:59] [SPEAKER_03]: like spike things to put them on like a

[00:48:01] [SPEAKER_03]: Shrike which is a type of bird I think

[00:48:03] [SPEAKER_03]: from Australia or like somewhere that

[00:48:06] [SPEAKER_03]: actually does impale its its prey

[00:48:08] [SPEAKER_03]: on on on for on thorns

[00:48:12] [SPEAKER_03]: before it'll go and get them again

[00:48:14] [SPEAKER_03]: to eat them

[00:48:16] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah animals are fucked up

[00:48:19] [SPEAKER_03]: indeed

[00:48:21] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah so

[00:48:23] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah going going to the

[00:48:26] [SPEAKER_03]: go to my my next quote here

[00:48:29] [SPEAKER_03]: it reached a long arm of weaved

[00:48:32] [SPEAKER_03]: tails all sorts of tails

[00:48:33] [SPEAKER_03]: some of hair some of skin

[00:48:36] [SPEAKER_03]: and muscle and bone

[00:48:38] [SPEAKER_03]: some of the shells and scales of sea life

[00:48:41] [SPEAKER_03]: I could make out the hair

[00:48:43] [SPEAKER_03]: of a horse silvery fish fins

[00:48:45] [SPEAKER_03]: and an entire gray and red line

[00:48:48] [SPEAKER_03]: of shrimp and lobster tails along one side

[00:48:51] [SPEAKER_03]: like armor there were other tails

[00:48:54] [SPEAKER_03]: I couldn't identify that were longer

[00:48:57] [SPEAKER_03]: easier to weave it didn't end

[00:49:00] [SPEAKER_03]: in a hand maybe it was more like

[00:49:03] [SPEAKER_03]: a tentacle or club

[00:49:05] [SPEAKER_03]: once again I really like just the

[00:49:08] [SPEAKER_03]: description of the story

[00:49:09] [SPEAKER_03]: especially of this woven tail

[00:49:11] [SPEAKER_03]: of these woven tails to form

[00:49:13] [SPEAKER_03]: like a tentacular arm appendage

[00:49:20] [SPEAKER_03]: it's just so

[00:49:21] [SPEAKER_03]: like with a creature that's like

[00:49:23] [SPEAKER_03]: kind of a made up of an amalgam of like

[00:49:24] [SPEAKER_03]: corpses and stuff like this is such a cool

[00:49:26] [SPEAKER_03]: way to describe that

[00:49:29] [SPEAKER_03]: and like also the whole creature

[00:49:32] [SPEAKER_00]: unrelated love the word tentacular

[00:49:34] [SPEAKER_00]: it sounds like something that the Ninja Turtles would say

[00:49:39] [SPEAKER_03]: it's because it's too it arrives

[00:49:41] [SPEAKER_03]: with tubular yeah

[00:49:43] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah I mean tentacular tubular

[00:49:46] [SPEAKER_03]: it has the same kind of like

[00:49:48] [SPEAKER_00]: it's got that kind of vibe yeah

[00:49:52] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah like honestly like we're saying

[00:49:54] [SPEAKER_03]: earlier the whole creature design is actually

[00:49:56] [SPEAKER_03]: really fun

[00:49:58] [SPEAKER_03]: just the way the amalgam of animal flesh

[00:50:00] [SPEAKER_03]: and bone

[00:50:02] [SPEAKER_03]: is described feels rather unique as far

[00:50:05] [SPEAKER_03]: as this kind of flesh golem kind of thing

[00:50:07] [SPEAKER_03]: is concerned like which is kind of how

[00:50:09] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm taking it is like this is some kind of like

[00:50:12] [SPEAKER_03]: carry on

[00:50:14] [SPEAKER_03]: like cadaverous or like flesh golem

[00:50:16] [SPEAKER_03]: like it's it's just constantly

[00:50:18] [SPEAKER_03]: replacing itself

[00:50:21] [SPEAKER_03]: like there's some kind of like

[00:50:22] [SPEAKER_03]: core to it that's like

[00:50:24] [SPEAKER_03]: building the shell of like corpse

[00:50:26] [SPEAKER_03]: of like of like shredded like muscle

[00:50:28] [SPEAKER_03]: and tissue

[00:50:30] [SPEAKER_00]: bring up warframe again but it's kind of like

[00:50:32] [SPEAKER_00]: zaku how it's just like some weird like skeletal

[00:50:34] [SPEAKER_00]: thing that takes the dead

[00:50:36] [SPEAKER_00]: like versions of itself around

[00:50:39] [SPEAKER_00]: to like put armor on himself

[00:50:42] [SPEAKER_03]: no that yeah whatever said like

[00:50:43] [SPEAKER_00]: sort of like that as well

[00:50:45] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[00:50:47] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah it's just such a cool like design

[00:50:52] [SPEAKER_03]: and

[00:50:52] [SPEAKER_03]: the next thing I have here

[00:50:56] [SPEAKER_03]: this is going to

[00:50:57] [SPEAKER_03]: go into like my hope my whole idea

[00:50:59] [SPEAKER_03]: like the buddy whore aspect of it

[00:51:01] [SPEAKER_03]: the creature climbs up on

[00:51:03] [SPEAKER_03]: my porch in an awkward shuffle

[00:51:05] [SPEAKER_03]: it reaches

[00:51:06] [SPEAKER_03]: out peeling the organs from the mice

[00:51:08] [SPEAKER_03]: it pastes them along

[00:51:10] [SPEAKER_03]: its head in a carefully

[00:51:12] [SPEAKER_03]: crafted spiraling pattern

[00:51:14] [SPEAKER_03]: I wave when it lifts

[00:51:16] [SPEAKER_03]: its face to look at me with its baby

[00:51:18] [SPEAKER_03]: bird head eyes

[00:51:20] [SPEAKER_03]: it has added to itself since

[00:51:22] [SPEAKER_03]: its last been

[00:51:24] [SPEAKER_03]: here an open smile

[00:51:26] [SPEAKER_03]: of human molars

[00:51:28] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah no this is

[00:51:30] [SPEAKER_03]: the coolest

[00:51:32] [SPEAKER_03]: visceral buddy whore I've ever

[00:51:34] [SPEAKER_03]: heard I've ever read

[00:51:36] [SPEAKER_03]: like you take

[00:51:38] [SPEAKER_03]: um the

[00:51:40] [SPEAKER_03]: I get it not

[00:51:42] [SPEAKER_03]: quite the thing you take you take

[00:51:44] [SPEAKER_03]: um

[00:51:44] [SPEAKER_03]: ET the extraterrestrial

[00:51:47] [SPEAKER_03]: a smattering of Jeepers creepers

[00:51:50] [SPEAKER_03]: and pet cemetery

[00:51:53] [SPEAKER_03]: and it's just this horrible

[00:51:55] [SPEAKER_00]: all in a pot mix it up and here you go

[00:51:57] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah this

[00:51:58] [SPEAKER_03]: horribly wholesome

[00:52:00] [SPEAKER_03]: uh buddy

[00:52:02] [SPEAKER_03]: visceral buddy whore

[00:52:04] [SPEAKER_03]: like boy meets mom

[00:52:06] [SPEAKER_03]: honestly legitimately I could

[00:52:08] [SPEAKER_03]: 100% see this being a

[00:52:10] [SPEAKER_03]: monster friend in monster another childish

[00:52:12] [SPEAKER_03]: things yeah RPG

[00:52:13] [SPEAKER_03]: like I would loved I would like stat

[00:52:16] [SPEAKER_03]: this out in a heartbeat like basically

[00:52:18] [SPEAKER_03]: be like a flesh coat

[00:52:19] [SPEAKER_03]: the the character the creature

[00:52:22] [SPEAKER_03]: like either hides by like slinking away

[00:52:24] [SPEAKER_03]: into the into the into the like into

[00:52:26] [SPEAKER_03]: the nearest trees or luri like turning

[00:52:28] [SPEAKER_03]: into just a regular coat

[00:52:30] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah the character

[00:52:31] [SPEAKER_03]: wears and then when it when it doesn't he

[00:52:33] [SPEAKER_03]: like throws the coat off and it becomes this

[00:52:34] [SPEAKER_03]: suddenly becomes this giant flesh coat

[00:52:37] [SPEAKER_03]: uh underneath it

[00:52:39] [SPEAKER_03]: it's pretty sick yeah like this

[00:52:41] [SPEAKER_03]: this feels like especially since the character

[00:52:43] [SPEAKER_03]: encounters it when he was a kid too so

[00:52:45] [SPEAKER_03]: like there's a precedent there

[00:52:49] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah this kid this character like clearly like

[00:52:51] [SPEAKER_03]: got traumatized from the first encounter

[00:52:54] [SPEAKER_03]: got infatuated with it became

[00:52:56] [SPEAKER_03]: became a

[00:52:57] [SPEAKER_03]: there's definitely some kind of like

[00:52:59] [SPEAKER_03]: subtle like influence it had

[00:53:01] [SPEAKER_03]: on this kid's life later because he became

[00:53:03] [SPEAKER_03]: a nature

[00:53:05] [SPEAKER_03]: reservist for like

[00:53:06] [SPEAKER_03]: bringing like roadkill out to like

[00:53:09] [SPEAKER_03]: to a vulture field

[00:53:10] [SPEAKER_03]: so like there's definitely some kind of

[00:53:13] [SPEAKER_03]: like influences had on that trauma

[00:53:14] [SPEAKER_03]: probably had some influence on him

[00:53:16] [SPEAKER_03]: growing up

[00:53:18] [SPEAKER_03]: and then he encountered it again

[00:53:21] [SPEAKER_03]: rolled more sand checks

[00:53:22] [SPEAKER_03]: failed at this point he has lost a lot

[00:53:24] [SPEAKER_03]: like enough sand checks

[00:53:25] [SPEAKER_03]: they just like uh like he's just become

[00:53:28] [SPEAKER_03]: more infatuated with this creature

[00:53:30] [SPEAKER_03]: so that he wants to become its friend

[00:53:33] [SPEAKER_03]: and again like maybe it's

[00:53:35] [SPEAKER_03]: not bad maybe it isn't like anything

[00:53:36] [SPEAKER_03]: malignant like it doesn't really seem to be

[00:53:39] [SPEAKER_03]: like

[00:53:40] [SPEAKER_03]: hostile in any way like it seems to be

[00:53:42] [SPEAKER_03]: only picking off like the

[00:53:44] [SPEAKER_03]: dead but

[00:53:46] [SPEAKER_03]: um like where did

[00:53:48] [SPEAKER_03]: those human molars come from

[00:53:52] [SPEAKER_03]: like that's

[00:53:53] [SPEAKER_00]: natural causes it's fine

[00:53:55] [SPEAKER_03]: like maybe there was a car crash nearby

[00:53:58] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah he didn't

[00:53:59] [SPEAKER_00]: necessarily kill someone to get those

[00:54:01] [SPEAKER_00]: not necessarily

[00:54:02] [SPEAKER_03]: well I don't think the creature does that at all

[00:54:05] [SPEAKER_00]: Vicks with bird eyes

[00:54:06] [SPEAKER_03]: wink wink wink wink wink

[00:54:08] [SPEAKER_00]: you know

[00:54:11] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah so um

[00:54:13] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah no this is just a really cool read of

[00:54:15] [SPEAKER_03]: like uh visceral

[00:54:16] [SPEAKER_03]: like because there's definitely a visceral element

[00:54:19] [SPEAKER_03]: with all like the description of the bottom

[00:54:20] [SPEAKER_03]: of like the animal parts

[00:54:22] [SPEAKER_03]: and like again like the part

[00:54:24] [SPEAKER_03]: we didn't like fully read earlier the

[00:54:26] [SPEAKER_03]: quote where it's like

[00:54:28] [SPEAKER_03]: um so with the

[00:54:30] [SPEAKER_03]: no skins part like this is the description we get

[00:54:32] [SPEAKER_03]: instead it had a

[00:54:34] [SPEAKER_03]: modeled coat of pink green

[00:54:36] [SPEAKER_03]: brown green oh

[00:54:38] [SPEAKER_03]: of pink gray brown green

[00:54:40] [SPEAKER_03]: and black the coat hung

[00:54:42] [SPEAKER_03]: like tassels shredded muscles

[00:54:44] [SPEAKER_03]: in varying stages of

[00:54:46] [SPEAKER_03]: wrought stringy and clumpy

[00:54:48] [SPEAKER_03]: all at once

[00:54:50] [SPEAKER_03]: muscles hung from yellowed bones

[00:54:52] [SPEAKER_03]: knobs of vertebrae

[00:54:54] [SPEAKER_03]: a radius

[00:54:55] [SPEAKER_03]: hanging from the last strings

[00:54:58] [SPEAKER_03]: of connective tissues to an ulna

[00:55:00] [SPEAKER_03]: ribs

[00:55:02] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm not sure what that means

[00:55:03] [SPEAKER_03]: to an ulna what is

[00:55:05] [SPEAKER_03]: what is that?

[00:55:07] [SPEAKER_03]: oh actually the radius is also a body part

[00:55:10] [SPEAKER_03]: it's um

[00:55:12] [SPEAKER_03]: okay interesting

[00:55:13] [SPEAKER_03]: um so the radius and

[00:55:16] [SPEAKER_03]: ulnas are actually the forearm of the bones in your forearm

[00:55:20] [SPEAKER_03]: like the two bones that make up your forearm

[00:55:22] [SPEAKER_03]: are actually the radius and the ulna

[00:55:24] [SPEAKER_03]: or in the ulna

[00:55:27] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[00:55:29] [SPEAKER_03]: um but yeah

[00:55:30] [SPEAKER_03]: like just that description and then like it goes in like

[00:55:32] [SPEAKER_03]: the bones were lightly gouged scraped clean of all flesh

[00:55:35] [SPEAKER_03]: all I saw

[00:55:36] [SPEAKER_03]: was the coat as it rose and rose

[00:55:38] [SPEAKER_03]: and rose and then it falls on the on the deer ribs

[00:55:41] [SPEAKER_03]: but like

[00:55:42] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah it's just such a like

[00:55:43] [SPEAKER_03]: such a cool

[00:55:46] [SPEAKER_03]: design

[00:55:47] [SPEAKER_03]: like again like can't

[00:55:49] [SPEAKER_03]: uh undersell that enough about this

[00:55:51] [SPEAKER_03]: the story like the design

[00:55:53] [SPEAKER_03]: of the creature and the way it acts is so

[00:55:56] [SPEAKER_03]: creepy

[00:55:57] [SPEAKER_03]: yet horrifically

[00:55:59] [SPEAKER_03]: wholesome

[00:56:00] [SPEAKER_03]: because it's not killing anybody it's actually

[00:56:03] [SPEAKER_03]: it's cleaning up

[00:56:04] [SPEAKER_03]: that we know of

[00:56:06] [SPEAKER_03]: that we know of yeah

[00:56:08] [SPEAKER_03]: again we are honestly

[00:56:10] [SPEAKER_03]: the most horrific thing we get in the story

[00:56:12] [SPEAKER_03]: is actually from the guy from Nair

[00:56:14] [SPEAKER_03]: when he's like

[00:56:15] [SPEAKER_03]: cutting open mice

[00:56:18] [SPEAKER_03]: and putting it on his property on his porch

[00:56:20] [SPEAKER_03]: like that's he's clearly snapped

[00:56:22] [SPEAKER_03]: in some way he's clearly broken

[00:56:26] [SPEAKER_03]: but like

[00:56:27] [SPEAKER_03]: again like this is where like the buddy whore element

[00:56:29] [SPEAKER_03]: comes in it's like that's the whore in this one

[00:56:30] [SPEAKER_03]: is like these guys are

[00:56:32] [SPEAKER_03]: this man or this person

[00:56:34] [SPEAKER_03]: and this creature are becoming kind of like

[00:56:36] [SPEAKER_03]: close and buddy buddy but the

[00:56:38] [SPEAKER_03]: person is doing

[00:56:41] [SPEAKER_03]: questionable things

[00:56:44] [SPEAKER_03]: in the process

[00:56:45] [SPEAKER_03]: as a result of like encountering

[00:56:47] [SPEAKER_03]: this creature and in his or in their

[00:56:48] [SPEAKER_03]: pursuit of becoming

[00:56:51] [SPEAKER_03]: buddy buddy with this creature so

[00:56:53] [SPEAKER_03]: mm-hmm

[00:56:54] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah no absolutely love it like

[00:56:56] [SPEAKER_03]: more buddy whore in the world needs to happen

[00:56:58] [SPEAKER_04]: yeah but yeah

[00:57:02] [SPEAKER_03]: honestly that's my actual thoughts

[00:57:03] [SPEAKER_03]: that that's it

[00:57:05] [SPEAKER_03]: yes

[00:57:07] [SPEAKER_03]: so Mikey these days for evil

[00:57:10] [SPEAKER_05]: and

[00:57:12] [SPEAKER_05]: as my first

[00:57:13] [SPEAKER_05]: quote here

[00:57:15] [SPEAKER_05]: it didn't stink

[00:57:18] [SPEAKER_05]: the way old chicken

[00:57:20] [SPEAKER_05]: in crab traps did

[00:57:22] [SPEAKER_05]: slimy and green and so fellow

[00:57:24] [SPEAKER_05]: you'd vomit in your nose

[00:57:26] [SPEAKER_05]: before you could fully describe

[00:57:28] [SPEAKER_05]: the rotting chicken scent

[00:57:29] [SPEAKER_05]: who is catching

[00:57:32] [SPEAKER_05]: chicken in crab traps

[00:57:33] [SPEAKER_05]: yeah I

[00:57:36] [SPEAKER_00]: it's confusing man

[00:57:39] [SPEAKER_00]: another part where I'm like

[00:57:41] [SPEAKER_03]: I wonder if that's something that's happened

[00:57:43] [SPEAKER_03]: like there's somewhere like that's like a

[00:57:45] [SPEAKER_03]: localization thing or something like that's

[00:57:47] [SPEAKER_03]: something that happens but like

[00:57:49] [SPEAKER_03]: I was willing to let it go

[00:57:51] [SPEAKER_00]: as far as I could tell

[00:57:53] [SPEAKER_00]: just based on like

[00:57:54] [SPEAKER_00]: my reading of the story and having all the information

[00:57:57] [SPEAKER_00]: the first time it's brought up

[00:57:59] [SPEAKER_00]: I was very confused as to

[00:58:01] [SPEAKER_00]: what smell this is and where

[00:58:03] [SPEAKER_00]: he's getting the smell from

[00:58:04] [SPEAKER_00]: and how he knows that specific smells

[00:58:07] [SPEAKER_00]: context of what it

[00:58:09] [SPEAKER_00]: smells like

[00:58:09] [SPEAKER_00]: I think it's because like the first time it's mentioned

[00:58:12] [SPEAKER_00]: he is referencing

[00:58:14] [SPEAKER_00]: the smell that he has smelled before

[00:58:17] [SPEAKER_00]: in the future of the story

[00:58:19] [SPEAKER_00]: but he's mentioning it first

[00:58:21] [SPEAKER_00]: in the past of the story

[00:58:22] [SPEAKER_00]: before we know that the creature smells like

[00:58:25] [SPEAKER_00]: that it's talking about

[00:58:26] [SPEAKER_00]: the smell of the creature so I just looked up

[00:58:30] [SPEAKER_03]: chickens in crab traps

[00:58:31] [SPEAKER_03]: so chicken or fish

[00:58:33] [SPEAKER_03]: are often used as bait for crabs

[00:58:35] [SPEAKER_03]: in crab traps

[00:58:37] [SPEAKER_00]: oh well what the fuck do I know

[00:58:39] [SPEAKER_00]: I'll just shut up

[00:58:39] [SPEAKER_03]: that mean like

[00:58:43] [SPEAKER_03]: you didn't mean to push up your glass

[00:58:45] [SPEAKER_00]: and be like oh I'm actually

[00:58:46] [SPEAKER_03]: to clarify yeah like so

[00:58:49] [SPEAKER_03]: that's where the smell is coming from it's actually

[00:58:51] [SPEAKER_03]: the crab bait for crab traps

[00:58:54] [SPEAKER_00]: okay

[00:58:56] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[00:58:57] [SPEAKER_00]: that makes more sense now

[00:58:59] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[00:58:59] [SPEAKER_03]: the first time it's brought up

[00:59:01] [SPEAKER_00]: it's like very random

[00:59:05] [SPEAKER_00]: honestly

[00:59:05] [SPEAKER_03]: it might also be a nice hint as to

[00:59:08] [SPEAKER_03]: where this is actually taking place because

[00:59:10] [SPEAKER_03]: somewhere where crab traps

[00:59:12] [SPEAKER_03]: are very freak or common

[00:59:15] [SPEAKER_00]: so here's the thing too

[00:59:16] [SPEAKER_00]: the first time it's brought up he says

[00:59:18] [SPEAKER_00]: like it didn't smell

[00:59:20] [SPEAKER_00]: like chicken in crab traps

[00:59:22] [SPEAKER_00]: like great what does it smell like then

[00:59:24] [SPEAKER_03]: you know

[00:59:25] [SPEAKER_03]: it smelled like

[00:59:27] [SPEAKER_03]: it smelled fresh like it didn't smell like

[00:59:29] [SPEAKER_03]: a corpse like it didn't smell like it was

[00:59:30] [SPEAKER_03]: that's I think where the smell

[00:59:32] [SPEAKER_03]: what he was trying to get at with the smell

[00:59:33] [SPEAKER_03]: it wasn't smelling like fowl

[00:59:36] [SPEAKER_03]: like smells that you would

[00:59:39] [SPEAKER_03]: expected it to

[00:59:41] [SPEAKER_04]: but

[00:59:42] [SPEAKER_04]: yeah

[00:59:44] [SPEAKER_03]: also I'm guessing this is somewhere in like the southern

[00:59:47] [SPEAKER_03]: western

[00:59:49] [SPEAKER_03]: eastern states if this is

[00:59:51] [SPEAKER_03]: if they're using that kind of stuff

[00:59:53] [SPEAKER_03]: because I'm seeing in some of the searches I'm

[00:59:55] [SPEAKER_03]: looking at I'm seeing a lot of Cajun stuff so

[00:59:58] [SPEAKER_03]: probably somewhere in that part

[00:59:59] [SPEAKER_03]: of the of the United States

[01:00:00] [SPEAKER_00]: for sure crab traps or cages you're right

[01:00:07] [SPEAKER_03]: they're Cajun them that's how they do them

[01:00:09] [SPEAKER_03]: I hate you so much

[01:00:11] [SPEAKER_00]: that's fine that's fair

[01:00:13] [SPEAKER_00]: I ask for this

[01:00:15] [SPEAKER_03]: every week you ask

[01:00:19] [SPEAKER_01]: yeah

[01:00:19] [SPEAKER_01]: yeah it is okay

[01:00:21] [SPEAKER_03]: this is payment for me like doing the

[01:00:23] [SPEAKER_03]: actually

[01:00:25] [SPEAKER_03]: we'll go with that

[01:00:27] [SPEAKER_03]: sorry Mikey you go

[01:00:29] [SPEAKER_05]: so I think

[01:00:31] [SPEAKER_05]: the my issue here

[01:00:34] [SPEAKER_05]: is that

[01:00:34] [SPEAKER_05]: I envisioned a whole chicken

[01:00:37] [SPEAKER_05]: yeah in a crab trap

[01:00:40] [SPEAKER_05]: that

[01:00:41] [SPEAKER_05]: was

[01:00:42] [SPEAKER_05]: slimy and green and decomposing

[01:00:45] [SPEAKER_04]: yeah

[01:00:47] [SPEAKER_05]: which is not what you would have in a crab trap so

[01:00:51] [SPEAKER_05]: if it was

[01:00:52] [SPEAKER_05]: actually chicken bait

[01:00:53] [SPEAKER_05]: or if you just

[01:00:56] [SPEAKER_05]: specify old chicken meat

[01:00:58] [SPEAKER_05]: in crab traps did

[01:00:59] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah also I'm not gonna lie

[01:01:02] [SPEAKER_03]: my interpretation of this without knowing about

[01:01:04] [SPEAKER_03]: crab traps and stuff like the actual

[01:01:05] [SPEAKER_03]: like what I just looked up

[01:01:08] [SPEAKER_03]: I was envisioning like crab trap is in

[01:01:10] [SPEAKER_03]: like probably like the cages that they put

[01:01:12] [SPEAKER_03]: they stuff chickens in

[01:01:14] [SPEAKER_03]: when they're transporting them and like sometimes

[01:01:16] [SPEAKER_03]: like I don't know if you guys know how horrific

[01:01:18] [SPEAKER_03]: that is for the chickens but like

[01:01:19] [SPEAKER_03]: sometimes chickens die in that and they just

[01:01:21] [SPEAKER_03]: like they just start rotting

[01:01:23] [SPEAKER_03]: in among the chicken the live chickens

[01:01:26] [SPEAKER_03]: so

[01:01:27] [SPEAKER_03]: like that's how I was kind of envisioning it was just like

[01:01:29] [SPEAKER_03]: those like packed chicken cages

[01:01:33] [SPEAKER_03]: but

[01:01:34] [SPEAKER_03]: obviously that wasn't the case but

[01:01:37] [SPEAKER_03]: similar yeah

[01:01:38] yeah

[01:01:40] [SPEAKER_03]: we were all like kind of like almost there

[01:01:43] [SPEAKER_03]: but not quite

[01:01:45] [SPEAKER_05]: yeah much

[01:01:47] [SPEAKER_05]: so my

[01:01:49] [SPEAKER_05]: next actual thought here

[01:01:51] [SPEAKER_05]: I have a couple quotes

[01:01:53] [SPEAKER_05]: okay

[01:01:55] [SPEAKER_05]: candy or plastic

[01:01:57] [SPEAKER_05]: glossy in the way

[01:01:59] [SPEAKER_05]: organs tend to be

[01:02:01] [SPEAKER_05]: beneath their thin membrane

[01:02:03] [SPEAKER_05]: footings

[01:02:05] [SPEAKER_05]: the glossy candy pink

[01:02:07] [SPEAKER_05]: of flesh stretched

[01:02:09] [SPEAKER_05]: out over the ribs

[01:02:12] [SPEAKER_05]: stood out

[01:02:13] [SPEAKER_05]: like spring blooms

[01:02:16] [SPEAKER_05]: against the light bright

[01:02:17] [SPEAKER_05]: green of freshly

[01:02:19] [SPEAKER_05]: unfurled leaves and young

[01:02:22] [SPEAKER_05]: vines

[01:02:23] [SPEAKER_05]: so

[01:02:24] [SPEAKER_05]: for me I found

[01:02:27] [SPEAKER_05]: the use of the word

[01:02:29] [SPEAKER_05]: candy

[01:02:31] [SPEAKER_05]: to describe the meat

[01:02:33] [SPEAKER_05]: of the

[01:02:35] [SPEAKER_05]: basically the bait

[01:02:38] [SPEAKER_05]: for this

[01:02:38] [SPEAKER_05]: creature

[01:02:40] [SPEAKER_05]: rather disturbing

[01:02:42] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[01:02:44] [SPEAKER_05]: has

[01:02:47] [SPEAKER_05]: which

[01:02:49] [SPEAKER_05]: makes me think

[01:02:51] [SPEAKER_05]: that

[01:02:52] [SPEAKER_05]: this

[01:02:54] [SPEAKER_05]: Nair

[01:02:57] [SPEAKER_05]: might also

[01:02:58] [SPEAKER_05]: partake of the

[01:03:00] [SPEAKER_05]: candy organs

[01:03:02] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm not gonna lie

[01:03:03] [SPEAKER_03]: as soon as you started going into that I was just envisioning Nair

[01:03:07] [SPEAKER_03]: just like licking his lips with his tongue as he's like cutting it open

[01:03:12] [SPEAKER_03]: I mean at this point

[01:03:13] [SPEAKER_03]: I wouldn't put a pass there honestly

[01:03:16] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[01:03:18] [SPEAKER_03]: um

[01:03:20] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[01:03:21] [SPEAKER_03]: also that description isn't 100%

[01:03:25] [SPEAKER_03]: unwarranted because I think in reality

[01:03:27] [SPEAKER_03]: like

[01:03:28] [SPEAKER_03]: organs do kind of like

[01:03:30] [SPEAKER_03]: from some of the image the horrific images I have seen of like

[01:03:33] [SPEAKER_03]: cut open

[01:03:35] [SPEAKER_03]: animals and stuff like that

[01:03:36] [SPEAKER_03]: um

[01:03:38] [SPEAKER_03]: they do kind of tend to look like plastic or like

[01:03:40] [SPEAKER_03]: kind of like

[01:03:43] [SPEAKER_03]: candy coating

[01:03:44] [SPEAKER_03]: glossiness

[01:03:46] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[01:03:48] [SPEAKER_03]: it's not great but

[01:03:51] [SPEAKER_03]: it's not an inaccurate description

[01:03:53] [SPEAKER_03]: like in reality

[01:03:56] [SPEAKER_05]: and that's the end of my actual thoughts

[01:04:00] [SPEAKER_05]: gamer

[01:04:04] [SPEAKER_00]: let's see

[01:04:05] [SPEAKER_00]: my first one

[01:04:06] [SPEAKER_00]: is in regards to

[01:04:08] [SPEAKER_00]: Nair washing his hands in the kitchen sink

[01:04:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I really sound like I'm in the nitpick nook or something

[01:04:13] [SPEAKER_00]: picking the weirdest thing he's a complain about

[01:04:15] [SPEAKER_00]: but here I am

[01:04:18] [SPEAKER_00]: he says

[01:04:18] [SPEAKER_00]: rinses his hands in the kitchen sink

[01:04:20] [SPEAKER_00]: two scrubs with the dish soap

[01:04:23] [SPEAKER_00]: before and after

[01:04:24] [SPEAKER_00]: stripping off my gloves

[01:04:26] [SPEAKER_00]: so when I read that I'm like only two

[01:04:29] [SPEAKER_00]: scrubs like what are you

[01:04:30] [SPEAKER_00]: a video game character

[01:04:31] [SPEAKER_00]: that's a short animation for that context

[01:04:34] [SPEAKER_00]: event you know like just washing

[01:04:36] [SPEAKER_00]: your hands just ehh ehh ok gloves

[01:04:38] [SPEAKER_00]: off ehh ehh there we go I'm done

[01:04:40] [SPEAKER_00]: you know it seems odd

[01:04:42] [SPEAKER_00]: that's described as two scrubs

[01:04:44] [SPEAKER_05]: well the thing is

[01:04:46] [SPEAKER_05]: there's two scrubs

[01:04:49] [SPEAKER_05]: which is what

[01:04:50] [SPEAKER_05]: nurses wear

[01:04:52] [SPEAKER_05]: that are in the dish soap

[01:04:58] [SPEAKER_01]: what

[01:05:00] [SPEAKER_01]: make sure to keep that

[01:05:02] [SPEAKER_01]: pause

[01:05:04] [SPEAKER_01]: I'm not going to short

[01:05:06] [SPEAKER_01]: that pause

[01:05:09] [SPEAKER_00]: I appreciate you trying

[01:05:10] [SPEAKER_00]: but no

[01:05:14] [SPEAKER_00]: I was

[01:05:14] [SPEAKER_00]: going to go there myself honestly so I'm glad you did

[01:05:17] [SPEAKER_00]: but yeah it's

[01:05:18] [SPEAKER_00]: just weird

[01:05:20] [SPEAKER_00]: it just says just a couple of scrubs over the gloves

[01:05:22] [SPEAKER_00]: and like ok

[01:05:23] [SPEAKER_00]: maybe that's ok if you're just getting

[01:05:25] [SPEAKER_00]: the viscera off your gloves and you're throwing them out

[01:05:28] [SPEAKER_00]: but like only a couple of scrubs

[01:05:30] [SPEAKER_00]: off your hands as well

[01:05:31] [SPEAKER_00]: why even bother using

[01:05:34] [SPEAKER_00]: soap if you're not like actually trying to

[01:05:35] [SPEAKER_00]: wash up after you know

[01:05:37] [SPEAKER_04]: it does say

[01:05:40] [SPEAKER_00]: scrubbed raw right after

[01:05:42] [SPEAKER_00]: that so maybe he's somehow

[01:05:44] [SPEAKER_00]: with his two scrubs

[01:05:46] [SPEAKER_00]: scrubbing his hands raw

[01:05:48] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah he's using like a

[01:05:50] [SPEAKER_00]: fricking like using a brass brush

[01:05:52] [SPEAKER_00]: with soap on it

[01:05:53] [SPEAKER_00]: there we go there's no skin on that anymore

[01:05:56] [SPEAKER_00]: that's raw I reckon

[01:05:57] [SPEAKER_03]: just like

[01:05:58] [SPEAKER_03]: my friend

[01:06:03] [SPEAKER_05]: he's using a magic eraser

[01:06:06] [SPEAKER_00]: yes

[01:06:07] [SPEAKER_00]: only takes two scrubs

[01:06:09] [SPEAKER_00]: god damn it

[01:06:14] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah

[01:06:16] [SPEAKER_00]: this was like questionably

[01:06:20] [SPEAKER_00]: grammar

[01:06:20] [SPEAKER_00]: as well I guess because it's like

[01:06:23] [SPEAKER_00]: descriptions kind of weak in my opinion but yeah

[01:06:25] [SPEAKER_03]: it's fine we've had a bunch of actual thoughts

[01:06:27] [SPEAKER_03]: in our grammar position now we have a bunch

[01:06:28] [SPEAKER_03]: of grammar and we've positioned our actual thoughts so

[01:06:30] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah that's fair

[01:06:32] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah and then that part we actually

[01:06:37] [SPEAKER_01]: talked about

[01:06:42] [SPEAKER_00]: now I've talked

[01:06:43] [SPEAKER_00]: about this before in previous career

[01:06:45] [SPEAKER_00]: post says but I'm gonna bring it up again

[01:06:46] [SPEAKER_00]: I may have stood there for hours at least long enough

[01:06:49] [SPEAKER_00]: for the light to change in regards to him being

[01:06:51] [SPEAKER_00]: stun locked basically

[01:06:54] [SPEAKER_00]: problem and if he's

[01:06:55] [SPEAKER_00]: like actually just

[01:06:56] [SPEAKER_00]: stun locked for hours

[01:06:58] [SPEAKER_00]: it seems a bit far fetched I know

[01:07:00] [SPEAKER_00]: like I know it's a

[01:07:01] [SPEAKER_03]: really really eyes right now

[01:07:04] [SPEAKER_00]: I know it's probably next

[01:07:06] [SPEAKER_00]: exaggeration and or

[01:07:08] [SPEAKER_00]: it's possibly because he's in a

[01:07:10] [SPEAKER_00]: trance from this creature that we know nothing

[01:07:12] [SPEAKER_00]: about so

[01:07:13] [SPEAKER_00]: both of those can just completely explain this

[01:07:16] [SPEAKER_00]: away and I'm fine with that but

[01:07:18] [SPEAKER_00]: regardless when a story says that

[01:07:20] [SPEAKER_00]: I may have stood there for hours

[01:07:22] [SPEAKER_00]: or staring at it when we haven't

[01:07:24] [SPEAKER_00]: even seen anything creepy at that point

[01:07:27] [SPEAKER_00]: it seems weird

[01:07:29] [SPEAKER_00]: sure

[01:07:31] [SPEAKER_00]: moving on

[01:07:33] [SPEAKER_00]: okay and then

[01:07:35] [SPEAKER_00]: we get the description of the monster

[01:07:37] [SPEAKER_00]: in like extreme detail

[01:07:39] [SPEAKER_00]: but then it says

[01:07:41] [SPEAKER_00]: all I saw was the coat as it

[01:07:44] [SPEAKER_00]: rose and rose and rose and then dropped

[01:07:45] [SPEAKER_00]: snapping branches on its way down

[01:07:47] [SPEAKER_00]: with the partial animal corpse

[01:07:50] [SPEAKER_00]: so if

[01:07:51] [SPEAKER_00]: all he saw was the coat then how to

[01:07:53] [SPEAKER_00]: get all the detail the bones and like

[01:07:55] [SPEAKER_00]: the mushed up face and all that

[01:07:57] [SPEAKER_00]: if it specifically says all I saw was the coat

[01:08:00] [SPEAKER_00]: and also it's like up in a tree

[01:08:02] [SPEAKER_02]: was the mushed up face

[01:08:05] [SPEAKER_02]: in the first encounter

[01:08:06] [SPEAKER_02]: or the second encounter

[01:08:07] [SPEAKER_00]: I don't know but regardless he describes

[01:08:09] [SPEAKER_00]: more than just the coat

[01:08:12] [SPEAKER_00]: like he

[01:08:13] [SPEAKER_00]: describes it in like pretty good detail

[01:08:16] [SPEAKER_00]: considering it's like up in a tree

[01:08:17] [SPEAKER_00]: great he was staring at it for possibly

[01:08:19] [SPEAKER_00]: hours so maybe

[01:08:21] [SPEAKER_00]: that's where the detail came from

[01:08:23] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah it was burning to his retina

[01:08:26] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah

[01:08:26] [SPEAKER_00]: and we don't know like how big of a tree

[01:08:29] [SPEAKER_00]: it was I don't know if it's like 100 feet

[01:08:31] [SPEAKER_00]: up or if it's just a short little tree that he's

[01:08:33] [SPEAKER_00]: hiding in where he's not actually that far away

[01:08:36] [SPEAKER_00]: so I guess

[01:08:37] [SPEAKER_00]: that's plausible yeah

[01:08:42] [SPEAKER_00]: and then here's more of

[01:08:45] [SPEAKER_00]: Nair standing around for hours when like

[01:08:48] [SPEAKER_00]: the first of the vultures

[01:08:49] [SPEAKER_00]: turkey vultures with their incredible sense of smell

[01:08:51] [SPEAKER_00]: started to land in the branches but they avoided

[01:08:53] [SPEAKER_00]: the trees nearest the corpse I watched

[01:08:55] [SPEAKER_00]: as the sun came up

[01:08:56] [SPEAKER_00]: and more birds filled

[01:08:59] [SPEAKER_00]: it flapping the wings and

[01:09:01] [SPEAKER_00]: hopping between the thickest branches

[01:09:03] [SPEAKER_00]: the day got warmer and brighter black

[01:09:05] [SPEAKER_00]: vultures started filling the gaps

[01:09:07] [SPEAKER_00]: so there is no

[01:09:09] [SPEAKER_00]: creepy creature in this scene

[01:09:11] [SPEAKER_00]: he just dropped off the animal

[01:09:13] [SPEAKER_00]: corpse and he is just standing

[01:09:15] [SPEAKER_00]: there watching these vultures eat

[01:09:17] [SPEAKER_00]: for hours

[01:09:19] [SPEAKER_00]: isn't he working isn't he on the

[01:09:21] [SPEAKER_00]: clock

[01:09:23] [SPEAKER_00]: maybe it's just a post to drop it off and wait

[01:09:26] [SPEAKER_03]: I don't know maybe

[01:09:27] [SPEAKER_03]: he didn't actually have anything else to do that

[01:09:29] [SPEAKER_03]: for the rest of that trip so I was just like

[01:09:30] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm just going to sit here and enjoy nature

[01:09:34] [SPEAKER_00]: I guess

[01:09:35] [SPEAKER_00]: but it kind of feels like you should just drop

[01:09:37] [SPEAKER_00]: it off and leave like you're giving them food

[01:09:39] [SPEAKER_00]: like

[01:09:40] [SPEAKER_00]: he's not taking the bones back you know

[01:09:42] [SPEAKER_03]: this guy is already kind of weird

[01:09:44] [SPEAKER_03]: and weirdly fascinated with like

[01:09:47] [SPEAKER_03]: animal death

[01:09:48] [SPEAKER_03]: so

[01:09:48] [SPEAKER_00]: okay that might be fair as well

[01:09:51] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah

[01:09:51] [SPEAKER_03]: this guy is like

[01:09:56] [SPEAKER_03]: oddly since his first encounter

[01:09:58] [SPEAKER_03]: with the corpse collector and like the deer ribs

[01:10:01] [SPEAKER_03]: when he was younger in high school

[01:10:03] [SPEAKER_03]: he has become sort of a weirdo

[01:10:07] [SPEAKER_01]: yeah

[01:10:09] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah probably

[01:10:14] [SPEAKER_00]: we were talking about that

[01:10:16] [SPEAKER_00]: and then my last note was basically just

[01:10:19] [SPEAKER_00]: where it says like death would

[01:10:20] [SPEAKER_00]: come as

[01:10:22] [SPEAKER_00]: it would follow I eventually built a little structure

[01:10:24] [SPEAKER_00]: with spikes and platforms to stick the dead

[01:10:26] [SPEAKER_00]: dying animals on like a shrine

[01:10:28] [SPEAKER_00]: this is the same reverence you do in front of his house

[01:10:30] [SPEAKER_03]: not like a shrine

[01:10:32] [SPEAKER_03]: like a shrike

[01:10:34] [SPEAKER_00]: okay sorry like a shrine

[01:10:35] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah just I misread that

[01:10:38] [SPEAKER_03]: okay

[01:10:40] [SPEAKER_00]: so he's doing this like in his house

[01:10:42] [SPEAKER_00]: outside his house

[01:10:44] [SPEAKER_00]: where does Nair live is he like in the middle

[01:10:46] [SPEAKER_00]: of a fucking city and he's just putting

[01:10:48] [SPEAKER_00]: dead corpses outside his house

[01:10:50] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm guessing not

[01:10:52] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm guessing he's somewhere

[01:10:54] [SPEAKER_00]: outside of in a rural setting

[01:10:56] [SPEAKER_00]: mind you

[01:10:57] [SPEAKER_00]: unless this is all set in Mad Max or something

[01:10:59] [SPEAKER_00]: and then this is fine

[01:11:00] [SPEAKER_03]: I mean to your credit it never says where he lives

[01:11:03] [SPEAKER_03]: which might be nice

[01:11:05] [SPEAKER_03]: like a nice little addition like he's like on the outskirts of a town or something like that

[01:11:09] [SPEAKER_03]: so he doesn't get a lot of

[01:11:10] [SPEAKER_03]: traffic

[01:11:12] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah otherwise this is very

[01:11:14] [SPEAKER_03]: concerning if he's doing this in like

[01:11:16] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah I live in the downtown core

[01:11:18] [SPEAKER_03]: like the little poor I'm guessing because he has a portion

[01:11:20] [SPEAKER_03]: of that he's not in a city

[01:11:22] [SPEAKER_03]: he's like somewhere near a

[01:11:23] [SPEAKER_03]: forest or something like that like somewhere out

[01:11:26] [SPEAKER_03]: near some wilderness

[01:11:28] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah probably

[01:11:30] [SPEAKER_03]: I couldn't get like

[01:11:31] [SPEAKER_03]: he's that guy

[01:11:33] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah he's definitely that guy

[01:11:35] [SPEAKER_03]: he's that guy that the parents warn the kids not

[01:11:38] [SPEAKER_03]: go to the other side of the street when you walk past that property

[01:11:41] [SPEAKER_03]: you know the property

[01:11:42] [SPEAKER_03]: with the animal hides

[01:11:44] [SPEAKER_03]: and like the dead animals

[01:11:46] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah

[01:11:48] [SPEAKER_00]: because of how the whole intro

[01:11:50] [SPEAKER_00]: was for me being confused

[01:11:52] [SPEAKER_00]: of where this guy lives

[01:11:53] [SPEAKER_00]: like if he's in a house, if he's in an alleyway

[01:11:56] [SPEAKER_00]: inside

[01:11:57] [SPEAKER_00]: I could like when I immediately went back

[01:12:00] [SPEAKER_00]: to him putting stuff inside his house

[01:12:02] [SPEAKER_00]: I immediately went back to

[01:12:04] [SPEAKER_00]: he's just in an apartment in town

[01:12:06] [SPEAKER_00]: so that

[01:12:07] [SPEAKER_00]: that confused me

[01:12:09] [SPEAKER_03]: it does say that he has a wooden porch

[01:12:11] [SPEAKER_03]: that creaks so like

[01:12:13] [SPEAKER_03]: that should help

[01:12:15] [SPEAKER_03]: like flavor

[01:12:15] [SPEAKER_03]: his domicile a little bit

[01:12:18] [SPEAKER_00]: true so here's an

[01:12:20] [SPEAKER_00]: overarching thing in regards to my brain

[01:12:22] [SPEAKER_00]: not understanding the information put to me here

[01:12:25] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah

[01:12:25] [SPEAKER_00]: there are a lot of clues said

[01:12:28] [SPEAKER_00]: that if you

[01:12:30] [SPEAKER_00]: by the end of the story

[01:12:32] [SPEAKER_00]: you could put them all together and build the visual

[01:12:35] [SPEAKER_00]: of this guy's house

[01:12:36] [SPEAKER_00]: and how he has things set up

[01:12:38] [SPEAKER_00]: but you have to read the whole story to get there

[01:12:40] [SPEAKER_03]: oh no

[01:12:43] [SPEAKER_00]: like

[01:12:44] [SPEAKER_01]: yeah

[01:12:47] [SPEAKER_00]: the fact that this guy lives

[01:12:49] [SPEAKER_00]: in like

[01:12:51] [SPEAKER_00]: out in the middle of nowhere with a creaky front porch

[01:12:53] [SPEAKER_00]: that isn't something

[01:12:55] [SPEAKER_00]: that needs to be left

[01:12:56] [SPEAKER_00]: to the end of the story as a twist

[01:12:58] [SPEAKER_00]: that's not a twist that he lives

[01:13:00] [SPEAKER_00]: out in the middle of nowhere

[01:13:02] [SPEAKER_00]: that should be something that's easily told to us

[01:13:04] [SPEAKER_00]: so we can have it described from the get go

[01:13:06] [SPEAKER_00]: because until you said that

[01:13:08] [SPEAKER_00]: right now

[01:13:09] [SPEAKER_00]: that he has a creaky front porch

[01:13:12] [SPEAKER_00]: it's like okay there that's pretty good proof

[01:13:14] [SPEAKER_00]: that he's living in a crappy

[01:13:16] [SPEAKER_00]: old like cabin or something

[01:13:18] [SPEAKER_00]: out in the woods

[01:13:19] [SPEAKER_00]: it took that long

[01:13:22] [SPEAKER_00]: to get there

[01:13:23] [SPEAKER_03]: I don't know, again this is

[01:13:26] [SPEAKER_03]: subjective because like I

[01:13:28] [SPEAKER_03]: have no problem with the way it is but like you do

[01:13:30] [SPEAKER_03]: like and like

[01:13:31] [SPEAKER_03]: I understand like we both have very

[01:13:33] [SPEAKER_03]: different ways of like reading stories and stuff

[01:13:35] [SPEAKER_03]: with that and appreciating stories

[01:13:37] [SPEAKER_03]: so um like I get

[01:13:39] [SPEAKER_03]: it but yeah this is

[01:13:41] [SPEAKER_03]: like sometimes

[01:13:43] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah you could like it's nice to have like

[01:13:45] [SPEAKER_03]: everything told up front but sometimes it's

[01:13:47] [SPEAKER_03]: nice to just have that part of the journey

[01:13:49] [SPEAKER_03]: of the story

[01:13:52] [SPEAKER_00]: I guess

[01:13:53] [SPEAKER_00]: but it's it's all told so

[01:13:55] [SPEAKER_00]: subtly that you had to

[01:13:57] [SPEAKER_00]: fucking tell me because I couldn't get there by

[01:13:59] [SPEAKER_00]: myself

[01:14:01] [SPEAKER_03]: I mean I don't have to tell you man

[01:14:03] [SPEAKER_00]: I am by no means a smart

[01:14:05] [SPEAKER_00]: man

[01:14:07] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm not saying that

[01:14:09] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm on the record I'm not saying that

[01:14:11] [SPEAKER_03]: I think

[01:14:14] [SPEAKER_03]: you're doing yourself a discredit as well

[01:14:15] [SPEAKER_03]: I think it's just like you

[01:14:17] [SPEAKER_03]: you perceive things a little bit differently than

[01:14:19] [SPEAKER_03]: I do in terms of like yeah

[01:14:21] [SPEAKER_03]: like you process things a little bit differently than I do

[01:14:23] [SPEAKER_00]: mm-hmm like because of

[01:14:25] [SPEAKER_00]: the way that I started reading this

[01:14:27] [SPEAKER_00]: which was I'm on the start

[01:14:29] [SPEAKER_00]: in line ready to go I

[01:14:31] [SPEAKER_00]: I start spreading immediately but there's

[01:14:33] [SPEAKER_00]: like a curb right in front of me and I fall

[01:14:35] [SPEAKER_00]: my face and I didn't know it was there

[01:14:37] [SPEAKER_00]: and then for the rest of the

[01:14:39] [SPEAKER_00]: sprint down the track I am

[01:14:41] [SPEAKER_00]: wobbly and disoriented

[01:14:42] [SPEAKER_00]: and when I get to the end

[01:14:45] [SPEAKER_00]: they tell me what happens like oh okay

[01:14:47] [SPEAKER_00]: that makes sense now

[01:14:49] [SPEAKER_04]: yeah

[01:14:51] [SPEAKER_00]: that's basically my my reading of this

[01:14:53] [SPEAKER_00]: story unfortunately yeah

[01:14:58] [SPEAKER_03]: that's the other way

[01:14:59] [SPEAKER_03]: okay

[01:15:03] well

[01:15:04] [SPEAKER_03]: I hope that's not sounding like

[01:15:06] [SPEAKER_03]: insulting at all in what I've been talking

[01:15:08] [SPEAKER_03]: about like that kind of stuff

[01:15:10] [SPEAKER_03]: what?

[01:15:11] [SPEAKER_03]: I haven't been like sounding like insulting at all

[01:15:13] [SPEAKER_03]: when I was like well we just have different

[01:15:15] [SPEAKER_03]: opinions like we see things differently

[01:15:18] [SPEAKER_03]: like I hope that's not like coming across like that

[01:15:20] [SPEAKER_03]: at all

[01:15:20] [SPEAKER_00]: hell I've been on here for how many

[01:15:24] [SPEAKER_00]: hundreds of episodes I get it

[01:15:26] [SPEAKER_03]: like it's fine

[01:15:27] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah we have different

[01:15:29] [SPEAKER_03]: brain processes

[01:15:31] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah and because we have different brain processes

[01:15:34] [SPEAKER_00]: it's actually

[01:15:35] [SPEAKER_00]: really good for our

[01:15:37] [SPEAKER_00]: discussion podcast here because

[01:15:39] [SPEAKER_00]: if you resonate with

[01:15:42] [SPEAKER_00]: different ones of us

[01:15:44] [SPEAKER_00]: then that's how you might like

[01:15:45] [SPEAKER_00]: the story hence why we all have different

[01:15:47] [SPEAKER_00]: recommendations because if

[01:15:49] [SPEAKER_00]: your brain works like cultists

[01:15:51] [SPEAKER_00]: you might like this certain way if it works

[01:15:53] [SPEAKER_00]: like Mikey's you might like it like a different way

[01:15:55] [SPEAKER_02]: you know yeah exactly

[01:15:58] [SPEAKER_00]: because if we were all the same person

[01:16:00] [SPEAKER_00]: we would all say the same thing all the time

[01:16:01] [SPEAKER_00]: and it'd be boring and then why

[01:16:03] [SPEAKER_03]: there's no longer discussion

[01:16:05] [SPEAKER_03]: for better or worse

[01:16:07] [SPEAKER_03]: we have different opinions on

[01:16:09] [SPEAKER_03]: how we view the world and how we

[01:16:12] [SPEAKER_03]: view stories so

[01:16:13] [SPEAKER_01]: for sure

[01:16:15] [SPEAKER_03]: but yeah so getting back to the

[01:16:17] [SPEAKER_03]: episode to

[01:16:19] [SPEAKER_03]: final thoughts

[01:16:22] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah I'm still going to recommend the story

[01:16:23] [SPEAKER_03]: um

[01:16:25] [SPEAKER_03]: I really enjoyed

[01:16:28] [SPEAKER_03]: the

[01:16:28] [SPEAKER_03]: the buddy horror aspect that

[01:16:31] [SPEAKER_03]: like kind of the story kind of

[01:16:32] [SPEAKER_03]: like gave us this journey of

[01:16:35] [SPEAKER_03]: like how this guy

[01:16:36] [SPEAKER_03]: like met this monster and

[01:16:38] [SPEAKER_03]: how he's like slowly became

[01:16:41] [SPEAKER_03]: influenced by it over the

[01:16:43] [SPEAKER_03]: over years

[01:16:44] [SPEAKER_03]: it is short but it's also

[01:16:46] [SPEAKER_03]: it's short and sweet

[01:16:48] [SPEAKER_03]: in my opinion

[01:16:50] [SPEAKER_03]: like in more ways than one

[01:16:52] [SPEAKER_03]: like it has

[01:16:54] [SPEAKER_03]: kind of a wholesome horror element

[01:16:55] [SPEAKER_03]: to it

[01:16:57] [SPEAKER_03]: with this like it's like boy meets monster

[01:17:01] [SPEAKER_03]: um but it's like

[01:17:02] [SPEAKER_03]: it's it's short but it

[01:17:04] [SPEAKER_03]: doesn't overstep itself or it doesn't

[01:17:06] [SPEAKER_03]: it gives us enough

[01:17:08] [SPEAKER_03]: for the story

[01:17:09] [SPEAKER_03]: I feel so

[01:17:12] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah I was left with the story

[01:17:14] [SPEAKER_03]: like feeling very it was very cool and creepy

[01:17:16] [SPEAKER_03]: uh viscerally

[01:17:18] [SPEAKER_03]: so I'm going to recommend the story

[01:17:20] [SPEAKER_03]: still Mikey the stands for evil

[01:17:22] [SPEAKER_05]: right

[01:17:24] [SPEAKER_05]: well the

[01:17:27] [SPEAKER_05]: description of the

[01:17:28] [SPEAKER_05]: meat was disturbing

[01:17:30] [SPEAKER_05]: the description

[01:17:32] [SPEAKER_05]: of the creature was disturbing

[01:17:35] [SPEAKER_05]: and

[01:17:36] [SPEAKER_05]: the uh

[01:17:37] [SPEAKER_05]: seems to be a bit disturbed

[01:17:40] [SPEAKER_05]: so

[01:17:42] [SPEAKER_05]: this uh

[01:17:44] [SPEAKER_05]: is

[01:17:45] [SPEAKER_05]: prime for being a creepy

[01:17:47] [SPEAKER_05]: pasta

[01:17:47] [SPEAKER_05]: it checks the

[01:17:51] [SPEAKER_05]: it checks the creepy

[01:17:54] [SPEAKER_05]: not it do

[01:17:59] [SPEAKER_05]: so

[01:18:02] [SPEAKER_05]: I'm still going to give this recommendation

[01:18:05] [SPEAKER_05]: okay

[01:18:07] [SPEAKER_05]: and gamer

[01:18:10] [SPEAKER_00]: so for me

[01:18:11] [SPEAKER_00]: as I've described multiple times with the

[01:18:13] [SPEAKER_00]: confusing opening and the descriptions for me

[01:18:15] [SPEAKER_00]: it was a bit of a struggle for me to get into

[01:18:17] [SPEAKER_00]: um

[01:18:19] [SPEAKER_00]: and

[01:18:21] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah like I've already said it multiple

[01:18:23] [SPEAKER_00]: times but

[01:18:25] [SPEAKER_00]: all that being said

[01:18:27] [SPEAKER_00]: when you have all the context

[01:18:29] [SPEAKER_00]: um I mean how even without

[01:18:31] [SPEAKER_00]: the full context of where the guy lives

[01:18:33] [SPEAKER_00]: it doesn't fucking matter his house

[01:18:35] [SPEAKER_00]: isn't the important

[01:18:36] [SPEAKER_00]: like part of the story the important

[01:18:39] [SPEAKER_00]: part of the story is the corpse collector

[01:18:40] [SPEAKER_00]: and everything revolving around the corpse collector

[01:18:43] [SPEAKER_00]: is fantastic

[01:18:44] [SPEAKER_00]: great

[01:18:45] [SPEAKER_00]: so in that aspect I do recommend this

[01:18:48] [SPEAKER_00]: it's just that the whole

[01:18:50] [SPEAKER_00]: like some of the descriptors could use a little

[01:18:52] [SPEAKER_00]: work a little tweak in my

[01:18:54] [SPEAKER_00]: opinion just for my brain the way

[01:18:56] [SPEAKER_00]: my brain works um

[01:18:58] [SPEAKER_00]: and because of that I'm going to say partial

[01:19:01] [SPEAKER_00]: but I still

[01:19:02] [SPEAKER_00]: do recommend it but it needs a little work

[01:19:04] [SPEAKER_00]: which is the

[01:19:06] [SPEAKER_00]: um definition of a partial in my

[01:19:08] [SPEAKER_00]: opinion

[01:19:10] [SPEAKER_05]: fair would you say

[01:19:12] [SPEAKER_05]: that it needs to be more fleshed

[01:19:14] [SPEAKER_05]: out

[01:19:23] [SPEAKER_03]: so yeah um

[01:19:25] [SPEAKER_03]: then I guess uh

[01:19:26] [SPEAKER_03]: full recommendations and then one partial

[01:19:29] [SPEAKER_03]: recommendation again depending on your

[01:19:31] [SPEAKER_03]: your viewpoint in such a story

[01:19:34] [SPEAKER_03]: mm-hmm

[01:19:35] [SPEAKER_03]: um but I think that'll do it for this week's

[01:19:37] [SPEAKER_03]: episode so if you like what you heard

[01:19:39] [SPEAKER_03]: or if you didn't leave a comment in the comment section

[01:19:41] [SPEAKER_03]: below where this gets posted

[01:19:43] [SPEAKER_03]: we're all on twitter kind of

[01:19:45] [SPEAKER_00]: don't lie to them anymore

[01:19:48] [SPEAKER_03]: Mikey's at the east end

[01:19:49] [SPEAKER_03]: some of us are on twitter

[01:19:51] [SPEAKER_03]: some of us are on twitter more than others

[01:19:54] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah

[01:19:55] [SPEAKER_03]: uh Mikey's at the east ends for evil

[01:19:57] [SPEAKER_03]: the gamer in yellow is at the gamer in yellow without that W at the end

[01:19:59] [SPEAKER_03]: because name is too damn long

[01:20:02] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah I kind of wish they

[01:20:03] [SPEAKER_00]: would give me like a million characters so I

[01:20:05] [SPEAKER_00]: could type that in specifically as my name

[01:20:07] [SPEAKER_00]: now as the gamer in yellow

[01:20:09] [SPEAKER_00]: but without the W because my name is too long

[01:20:11] [SPEAKER_00]: like that's that would be my full title

[01:20:13] [SPEAKER_03]: yeah that'd be hilarious

[01:20:15] [SPEAKER_00]: like I wouldn't just put the W

[01:20:17] [SPEAKER_00]: and be done with it no I would just

[01:20:19] [SPEAKER_00]: go with the whole bit

[01:20:21] [SPEAKER_03]: yep

[01:20:23] [SPEAKER_03]: uh and I'm at review cultist

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[01:21:26] [SPEAKER_03]: wholesomely horrific buddy horror

[01:21:31] [SPEAKER_03]: until next time I have been your host for view cultist

[01:21:33] [SPEAKER_03]: I'm Mikey

[01:21:34] [SPEAKER_03]: he's 10th year old

[01:21:35] [SPEAKER_00]: I'm a gamer in yellow

[01:21:36] [SPEAKER_03]: and this has been al dente rigamortis

[01:21:40] [SPEAKER_03]: sleep well

[01:22:10] [SPEAKER_00]: I feel like I should change my recommendation to full recommendation

[01:22:29] [SPEAKER_00]: based solely on the fact that this is a buddy horror

[01:22:32] [SPEAKER_03]: that is true

[01:22:35] [SPEAKER_00]: I would you know what yeah

[01:22:38] [SPEAKER_00]: I'll put this in the outro

[01:22:39] [SPEAKER_00]: yeah please